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The Remains of An End

rabbit tracks darting coming to an end saga scripted in relief... wing imprints in the snow 03.21.2019 Writing Challenge 4, March 2019 - Kimo - Poetry Contest Sponsored by Dear Heart

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Bernard Chan

Date: 5/3/2019 8:08:00 PM

Nice! Love the concept. Such cool imagery. Congrats!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 5/4/2019 8:32:00 AM

Thank you! I should revisit this form, I liked it.

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

Date: 3/30/2019 2:23:00 PM

Poor rabbit. well done Maureen

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 3/31/2019 8:23:00 AM

Tee hee, yeah, poor bunny, that one and the one I'm stewing today ;) Thank you Allen! xomo

Constance La France

Date: 3/25/2019 3:11:00 PM

Maureen, congratulations on your win in my contest. Nature can be cruel but each creature must eat to survive ~

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 3/25/2019 4:07:00 PM

Thank you so much Constance, for the prompt and my placement :) xomo!

Kibuuka Michael

Date: 3/25/2019 9:49:00 AM

great! nice one really!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 3/25/2019 4:06:00 PM

Thank you! :) xomo!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/24/2019 10:31:00 AM

The eaglets had a feast that night! Nice one, Maureen. Congratulations!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 3/24/2019 11:34:00 AM

A fine feast had! ...yummy bunny ;p Thank you Caren! xomo

Joseph May

Date: 3/24/2019 10:19:00 AM

Congrats on your win Maureen..

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 3/24/2019 11:35:00 AM

Thank you Joseph. xomo

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/24/2019 8:10:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem in the kimo contest, Maureen :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 3/24/2019 9:22:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise :) xomo!

Silent One

Date: 3/24/2019 6:57:00 AM

This is a fantastic kimo... you really are the queen of the short form..

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 3/24/2019 9:21:00 AM

Some like it short ;) Missed you. Thank you my friend. xomo

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 3/23/2019 7:37:00 PM

Great write! I witness that drama on my farm from time to time

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 3/24/2019 9:21:00 AM

Very cool! I have yet to witness a raptor take prey, it's on my wish list ;) Thank you Timothy, xomo

Arturo Michael

Date: 3/23/2019 6:43:00 AM

Something was hungry...or they went to see a show...

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 3/24/2019 9:19:00 AM

Lol! ;) xomo

Joseph May

Date: 3/23/2019 4:38:00 AM

Very creative Maureen, well crafted..

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 3/24/2019 9:18:00 AM

Thank you Joseph, xomo

Ann Gilmour

Date: 3/23/2019 4:10:00 AM

This has to be the winner Maureen, you are the master as you paint a vivid picture with your words. Good luck in the contest! Kindest thoughts Ann xx

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 3/24/2019 9:18:00 AM

Thank you Ann :) xomo!

Paul Callus

Date: 3/22/2019 4:25:00 PM

Your Kimo says it all, Maureen. We can follow the script and picture the whole sad drama evolving. In my eyes, a sure winner! Warm regards // paul

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 3/22/2019 5:00:00 PM

...that said, the violence captured in relief was spectacular.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 3/22/2019 4:50:00 PM

Thank you Paul. I am intrigued by the varied response to this piece; seeing the tracks was the opposite of sad for me, thrilled that not only do I have rabbits living on my street, but raptors too, nature thriving despite the city. :) xomo!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/22/2019 11:29:00 AM

You always say so much in just a few words, Maureen..this is brilliant!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 3/22/2019 12:53:00 PM

Thank you so much Vijay! :))) xomo!

Jeff Connelly

Date: 3/22/2019 10:36:00 AM

Brilliant as always. For some reason I see a Snowy Owl dining.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 3/22/2019 12:51:00 PM

I'm pretty sure it was an owl, it was just up the street from me- not prime hawk hunting- accepiters aside, lots of Cooper's Hawks and Falcons around. Thank you Jeff!

John Lawless

Date: 3/22/2019 9:36:00 AM

...and the hawk leaves not footprints....very nicely done Mo

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 3/22/2019 9:47:00 AM

I like that. Thank you John :) xomo

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/22/2019 4:48:00 AM

- Poor cute little rabbits, Maureen - A great kimo - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 3/22/2019 8:10:00 AM

They are awfully cute ;) Thank you Anne-Lise, xomo!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 3/22/2019 3:02:00 AM

There is no one better at this! Loved it!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 3/22/2019 8:11:00 AM

You are too kind <3 xomo!

Rhona Mcferran

Date: 3/21/2019 10:59:00 PM

Wow, brilliant piece!! Love it! ;)

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 3/22/2019 8:14:00 AM

Thank you so much Rhona! My first crack at a Kimo ;) xomo! <3

Vickie Hurtt - Thayer

Date: 3/21/2019 6:05:00 PM

Oh...Winner Please! Being a raptor lover and having found at least twenty Cooper's hawk. Red tail hawks and Owl feathers, this is a favorite of mine. Good Luck...Vickie.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 3/21/2019 8:54:00 PM

Oooh! An enviable collection! ;) Peeked out my front door today in time to see a female Cooper's Hawk in a sneak attack. I had my Merlin and Peregrine feather collection, but having pet birds I don't bring any home anymore. Thank you Vickie! xomo

Eve Roper

Date: 3/21/2019 1:25:00 PM

Great Kimo, Maureen, the imagery is great. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve ~`*

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 3/21/2019 8:46:00 PM

Thank you Eve! My first :))) xomo!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/21/2019 1:19:00 PM

Poor bunnies, when I used to go out to work at 04.00 Id see them at the side if the road and as I passed they'd run out in front of my car, must have been my headlights'.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 3/21/2019 8:44:00 PM

Death wish hare without a care! That reminds me of Bermuda, the roads every morning littered with toads ;) xomo!

M. L. Kiser

Date: 3/21/2019 12:47:00 PM

This was so vibrant in imagery that I had to "fav" it. Just excellent! Good luck in the contest.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 3/21/2019 12:58:00 PM

Wow! Thank you so much M.L., the image is seared in my memory :) xomo!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/21/2019 9:21:00 AM

Intricate ideas here. I can see the wing imprints...wow! Perhaps the wounded flies with its newfound wings. That saga scripted in relief is the part that gets my attention.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 3/21/2019 10:01:00 AM

Thank you Kim. I have been twice blessed to come across owl prints in the snow, me being the kind of birder that relishes finding pigeon wings... signs of happy hawks ;) ...been waiting years for this poem. xomo!

Pat Adams

Date: 3/21/2019 9:11:00 AM

I'm not a hunter, so this seems sad to me. Some don't care about the life of the wild I suppose, or just think of it as sport. I'm not real brilliant, so I may be missing the point. Regardless, it brings emotion from me, so I thank you for that. Well done my friend and good luck in the contest!.......80)

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 3/21/2019 9:42:00 AM

I'm no hunter, but I love raptors. Sad if you love rabbits. ;) I love all nature being natural. I saw these tracks in the snow a couple years ago, the story of an owl hunting rabbits in my neighbourhood, Thank you my friend! xomo