The Relic

The chimney stands alone
A relic of what once had been known
The home had stood here filled with love
Many promises and hard work made use of

The children went away to different lives
Some better, some worse, some just survived
But none wanted to perserve
The inheritance of the past, the future conserve

The chimney stands alone
Still radiating what once shone
Family gathered around close
Loving, eating the meal that was chose

The chimney stands alone
It glowed in the night with warmth shown
Children studied lessons by the flame
Mother read to them the "Bible" about God's name

Now, now the chimney stands alone
The children won't come home
Dad is gone on to his reward
Mom lives only in their memories

The chimney stands alone
A relic of the past gone 

(This is the way that this was given to me from somewhere after seeing a chimney standing 
alone on the road that I live.  I have gone by that chimney day after day. Then one day I 
saw it.  I have written the same poem in another form but this is what I was given from the 
somewhere.  Which do you think is the better of the two?  The other is called "The Chimney".)

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Date: 9/30/2009 1:51:00 PM
Delightful poem Sara>>James
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Date: 9/29/2009 12:46:00 PM
Haven't seen the other yet, but this one reminds me of the brick oven chimney that stands as a landmark in nearby Tamoka State Park. It's been there for centuries and many stories are associated with the family that might have lived there. You have regenerated my interest in this chimney and I think I'll go by there tomorrow and search for inspiration. Excellent write, Sara! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/29/2009 8:04:00 AM
awww, I this one is pretty cool, but I think Chimney is way better...keep writing.
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