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The Reindeer Strike

ALL OF SANTAS REINDEER WENT ON STRIKE NEEDING MORE THAN JUST HAY & KIBBLES, NO MATTER IF THEY BE BUCK OR DOE THEY CAN not fly too far on Just nibbles. Rudolph of course is the spokesdeer, he so much, wants to right this disgrace, with special concessions for himself since he gets the most snow in his face! Rudolph shouted, "Who is with me now?" Even backup deer, Jane and Matt excitedly raised, their hooves having to get on their backs for that! Charles, the deer, that cleans up the joint raised three, for he's mis- sing a hoof. Taking the place of Donner one night, He slipped and fell off a high roof! Santa admitted it was about time. He said, "I'm doubling kibbles and hay!" they all clapped their hooves in Delight, for the reindeer it was a great day! Santa said, "If you want overtime, you can work in my garden for dough", One deer in the back asked, " Doing What?" Well, of course he said, "HOE, HOE, HOE!"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/23/2020 3:01:00 PM
Sheer brilliance, ha ha ha . . . : )
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Pat Adams
Date: 3/25/2020 7:52:00 AM
Thanks Indiana. I appreciate that!......80)
Date: 3/23/2020 10:57:00 AM
Hi again - I had fun re reading this, congratulations on it being one of the featured poems this week!
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Date: 3/25/2020 7:51:00 AM
Thanks Michelle! It was a pleasant surprise......Pat
Date: 10/29/2018 10:16:00 PM
Lol! ;D Love it! xomo
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Pat Adams
Date: 10/30/2018 7:07:00 AM
Thanks! That's what I like to hear, er, read!...80)
Date: 10/29/2018 2:35:00 PM
So impressed with the visual, Pat - concrete is something I couldn't begin to do - AND you put rhymes in, too! (ha ha) Not sure if this is for the contest, but great job!
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Date: 10/29/2018 2:44:00 PM
On paper it's perfectly centered, but had trouble with the horns when I submitted it. I guess they allow less width on the site. Oh well! Thanks for the comment Michelle.......pat (Oh. It's not for a contest.)
Date: 10/29/2018 11:19:00 AM
HOE HOE HOE...to rake in the kibble. Love this Pat, subtle humor and a few loud snorts.....
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Date: 10/29/2018 2:34:00 PM
Thanks! Well, I've been a little obsessed with the concrete form lately but I thought it came out ok...............pat
Date: 10/29/2018 6:59:00 AM
Hoe Hoe Hoe indeed. A festive beauty, Pat !! Superbly done.
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Pat Adams
Date: 10/29/2018 2:33:00 PM
Thanks Line! It took a while!..........80)

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