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The Red the White and the Blue -The Free Flow Style

~The Red The White And The Blue~ 
(Free Flow Style) 


Let's all stand by the red 
The white and the blue, 
There she stands in all her 
Glory 
And in all her colors so 
Proud 

She may be burnt and by some 
People torn apart 
But there she still stands 
very, very proud, 
In the houses, in the buildings 
Flying always, 
Always untouched in the wind 

And in the hearts of the brave 
The proud and the free, 
She's much loved by me and 
All of us 
That believe in her cause and 
Her dreams, 
So she will always stand in 
Our hearts, no matter what, 
In all her radiant colors of 
Red, white and blue.... 
Flying higher and very proud 
In all the hearts of the brave 
And the free, 
And all the Ones that we love 
And defend Liberty. 


Dorian Petersen Potter 
aka ladydp2000 
Copyright@2015 




July.04.2016

Copyright © Dorian Petersen Potter | Year Posted 2016

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Gary Bateman Date: 7/4/2016 7:38:00 AM Hello Dear One "D" -- Happy Fourth of July to you!! I really like this write. The "Red, White, and Blue" is truly magnificent in the every respect. I always dearly enjoy your Fourth of July poems. This one is naturally, a 7+++++ and a FAV!! (Please take a look, if you have some time, at "The Bewitching Call of the Siren." It's a Canzone write I just posted today. It's worth a read!!) Again, Best Holiday Wishes from Ingrid and me!! Spill Ink!! "G" Login to Reply Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 7/4/2016 8:51:00 PM Hi there again G!:)Thank you ever so kindly my dear friend Gary,for stopping by again n' commenting so beautifully on my poem here.I'm so glad you like my 4th of July poem here:))I deeply appreciate you in all and your very kind visits, n' of course the very awesome comments, the 7 pluses/ fav's, n' all you always leave me behind when you visit me.You're always very kind to me,G!I really hope that all is well for you n' Ingrid, with your poetry writing n' with your second book. Looking forward to reading it for sure:)Thanks so much again,for your support and all:)Sending my love n' prayers to you and Ingrid as always!Take very good care of each other now.Wishing you a very happy n' safe 4th of July!Spill ink!Best to you always,G!Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))D.