The Red the White and the Blue -The Free Flow Style

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~The Red The White And The Blue~ (Free Flow Style) Let's all stand by the red The white and the blue, There she stands in all her Glory And in all her colors so Proud She may be burnt and by some People torn apart But there she still stands very, very proud, In the houses, in the buildings Flying always, Always untouched in the wind And in the hearts of the brave The proud and the free, She's much loved by me and All of us That believe in her cause and Her dreams, So she will always stand in Our hearts, no matter what, In all her radiant colors of Red, white and blue.... Flying higher and very proud In all the hearts of the brave And the free, And all the Ones that we love And defend Liberty. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 Copyright@2015 July.04.2016

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Gary Bateman

Date: 7/4/2016 7:38:00 AM

Hello Dear One "D" -- Happy Fourth of July to you!! I really like this write. The "Red, White, and Blue" is truly magnificent in the every respect. I always dearly enjoy your Fourth of July poems. This one is naturally, a 7+++++ and a FAV!! (Please take a look, if you have some time, at "The Bewitching Call of the Siren." It's a Canzone write I just posted today. It's worth a read!!) Again, Best Holiday Wishes from Ingrid and me!! Spill Ink!! "G"

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 7/4/2016 8:51:00 PM

Hi there again G!:)Thank you ever so kindly my dear friend Gary,for stopping by again n' commenting so beautifully on my poem here.I'm so glad you like my 4th of July poem here:))I deeply appreciate you in all and your very kind visits, n' of course the very awesome comments, the 7 pluses/ fav's, n' all you always leave me behind when you visit me.You're always very kind to me,G!I really hope that all is well for you n' Ingrid, with your poetry writing n' with your second book. Looking forward to reading it for sure:)Thanks so much again,for your support and all:)Sending my love n' prayers to you and Ingrid as always!Take very good care of each other now.Wishing you a very happy n' safe 4th of July!Spill ink!Best to you always,G!Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))D.