The Red Tailed Hawk

Perched, waiting, still
He swoops with swift precision
Red tail fanned in flight
His cry announcing intent
See the beauty in this flight...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Bellefleur Avatar
May 12, 2009 at 8:33 PM
lots of these on the prairies - certainly describes them to a T..
Fraser Avatar
May 12, 2009 at 11:49 AM
Barbara, i am a great lover of birds of prey, and this is a cracking piece to a most delightful bird, they are easily trained and used throughout America for Falconry, it,s a Wow factor for me, James,x
Richards Avatar
May 12, 2009 at 8:48 AM
One time, after being away for a few days, we came home to find a red tailed hawk chick had fallen out of a nest, and was injured and in the grass of our backyard. My husband drove it to a sanctuary 20 miles up the road, where they nursed it and released it once it recovered. They are seen from time to time above our home.
Winter Avatar
May 12, 2009 at 5:01 AM
Wish I could. Do not see many, if any, of them around here. Your beautiful poem makes me jealous : ). Excellent write. Love, Shar
Strand Avatar
May 11, 2009 at 11:59 PM
Had a very similar experience on Saturday last with a Red Kite in our garden.Excellent poetry BG.Rgds Brian
Esquire Avatar
May 11, 2009 at 9:31 PM
Dear My Only most beloved Barbeeg I sat here, Holding YOUR HAND Our hair Kisses foreheads meet In the" Mirror of YOUR Eyes : "Red tail fanned in Flight" I hold YOUR hand tighter : My Security "My Heartbeats Anew" "His cry announcing intent" Drowns out my cry: to Be the LOVER in YOUR EYES I feel new LIFE: new LOVE Do YOU?? "See the beauty in this flight" I do : it's YOU "Barbara Jean" My arms FOREVER Hold YOU Tight Great WRITE Do YOU Forgive me now
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May 11, 2009 at 7:44 PM
A crystal-clear image of one of nature's most beautiful predators planning and executing his attack. Beautiful writing, Barbara! Love, Carolyn
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