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The Red Kite

The red kite flowing, blowing, gliding soaring red and pulsating in the wind playing, cradling, cascading then the wind takes it sometimes down sometimes headlong ready to collide at other times upward like a crimson, soaring bird floating on air triangle wings racing not wanting to stop.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/25/2012 11:42:00 AM
A marvelous composition! There is some 'musical' alliteration and assonance in your first three sections... and your imagery is compelling. Well done, Lorraine!! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 5/18/2012 6:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poetry this week Lorraine. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/14/2012 9:56:00 AM
so wonderful please write more :)
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Date: 5/9/2012 6:24:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning Lorraine. Hope you have a great day. Love, Carol
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