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The Recepticle : One of a kind

Recepticle:  One of a kind

It was a thoughtful gift
in the shape of her heart

Symbolic inscription-
"Love's Everlasting Hopes"
kept next to the front door
In shadow, in half-light.

She kept her car keys there.
Small change, new receipts
pins and paperclips, pens
lipstick, bangles, spare things...

Simple concave, convex
Moulded mind-heart shape
Porcelain pale shadow
Clear intent left it there

Till the time came when smirk smile
black hate eyes stepped inside
sleight of hand side-swipe flick
despise, devalue, discard
done with splitting, slitting
pound of flesh sacrifice-

So easy to replace, 
no end to his supplies
She only had One Heart
for him, no Big Surprise, 
a common vessel trade
for his communal use

Belly feels deep pity
for its now shattered state, 
She drops to hands and knees
Picks up each fragile piece

bright blood drips from fresh cuts 
thin red lines smear love read,
Torn vessel spills plasma
tears, love is precious life

Dustpan holds bits and pieces... 
Impulse to throw away
Hesitation- thoughtful
ancient wisdom whispers, 
revalue all for gain
Again, a gain, again

She knows  what she can do... 

Fix it with liquid gold

Now it gleams in the dark. 


A Receptacle Poem: One of a kind

Aqua Marine Poems. 
Restructured from my original poem posted in 2016.









Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 3/21/2024 1:41:00 PM
Awesome poetry AM. I have a feeling Charlotte would like this one. Rich in symbolism
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Aqua Marine
Date: 4/1/2024 3:51:00 PM
Thank you, Tom. Appreciate your encouraging comment and visit... ((Hugs))
Date: 2/28/2024 10:18:00 AM
wow, what a great metaphor for a heart once loved now broken. i enjoyed this one.
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Date: 2/28/2024 9:48:00 PM
Hi Andrea, lovely to see you here, and your comment much appreciated! Yes, and it took time to understand, only chance we have is to put our hearts back together again. Love in all it's empathetic, compassionate "forms" is a precious commodity. When hearts are devalued, broken, we can put it back together again, because love itself, even self love, heals broken hearts.<3 Big Hug!
Date: 2/19/2024 9:47:00 AM
Your imagery and emotions induce a poet to think deeply to understand its poetic meaning.
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Aqua Marine
Date: 2/20/2024 12:20:00 PM
I appreciate very much your thoughtfulness-I understand it as coming from a non judgemental place in a caring heart. :)
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Aqua Marine
Date: 2/20/2024 12:09:00 PM
Thank you so much, Victor, that's the way I feel too, when reading the poems here on PS. Through the ages, artists of all genres have "spoken" about people "with feelings like ourselves" whether through art, song, poetry, play acting, writing. Humans have left their handprints on cave walls, their sins exposed in the Bible, their human needs in myths and fairy tales, their history in photographs, their names, birth and death dates on tombstones... We want to know the human being behind the poem, and the name. You are welcome to soup mail, if you need a more in depth analysis of this poem. (((Warm Hugs)))
Date: 2/18/2024 11:22:00 AM
Your poignant poem beautifully captures the journey of love, loss, and resilience through vivid imagery and emotional depth. The symbolism of the heart-shaped gift, inscribed with "Love's Everlasting Hopes," poignantly portrays the sincerity and vulnerability of the giver's affection, cherished by the recipient next to the front door, a symbol of home and heart.. Nicely done dear..
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Aqua Marine
Date: 2/18/2024 1:45:00 PM
Thank you for your welcome visit and comment, SO. Much appreciated, indeed. (((Warm Hugs...))) Aqua.
Date: 2/18/2024 4:17:00 AM
A good chance for tending to, letting God take control of your priceless artifact of heart. Sad, when humans shatter other humans though.
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Aqua Marine
Date: 2/18/2024 10:57:00 AM
We are poets on this poetry soup stage, speaking to the fourth wall, knowing our words will have an effect on our audience, good or bad. As yours did when I read them. It's about humans needing connection, and to communicate with each other. Sitting around a fire, sharing stories, experiences, wisdom is common cultural behavior all over the world. I love it!
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Date: 2/18/2024 10:50:00 AM
2) Took me the best part of 60++years to work it all out-one baby step at a time. My sons and I have deep discussions about breaking, or burning the cycle handed down through hundreds of years of familial history. We have love, peace, compassion, collaboration in our little family. It's taken dedication, mercy, sacrifice, hope, faith in inherent goodness, and prayer. I am free to fix my precious being with God's Help.
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Date: 2/18/2024 10:39:00 AM
He hears us, even when we don't listen with our ears(just my own personal experience... :)) Personal research has shown me I had a choice to leave, CO-dependancy was my addiction. I say "was," because a trauma bond "love addiction" can be overcome, once your eyes are opened. My heart was not "whole" in the first place - environmentally nurtured, and genetic disorders were in place before I was born.
Date: 2/17/2024 11:34:00 PM
Kintsugi: metaphor for embracing your flaws and imperfections. From Japanese: kin (gold) +tsugi (join) Traditional Japanese art that involves repairing broken pottery using lacquer with gold, silver, platinum. The idea is that broken objects are not inherently worthless, their brokenness can be seen as a part of their history and beauty. Does God feel the same about imperfect humans? "His power is made perfect in weakness" - 2Corinthians12:19. <3 With Love, Hope, Faith. 1Corinthians 13:1-13
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