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The Recepticle : One of a kind

Recepticle: One of a kind It was a thoughtful gift in the shape of her heart Symbolic inscription- "Love's Everlasting Hopes" kept next to the front door In shadow, in half-light. She kept her car keys there. Small change, new receipts pins and paperclips, pens lipstick, bangles, spare things... Simple concave, convex Moulded mind-heart shape Porcelain pale shadow Clear intent left it there Till the time came when smirk smile black hate eyes stepped inside sleight of hand side-swipe flick despise, devalue, discard done with splitting, slitting pound of flesh sacrifice- So easy to replace, no end to his supplies She only had One Heart for him, no Big Surprise, a common vessel trade for his communal use Belly feels deep pity for its now shattered state, She drops to hands and knees Picks up each fragile piece bright blood drips from fresh cuts thin red lines smear love read, Torn vessel spills plasma tears, love is precious life Dustpan holds bits and pieces... Impulse to throw away Hesitation- thoughtful ancient wisdom whispers, revalue all for gain Again, a gain, again She knows what she can do... Fix it with liquid gold Now it gleams in the dark. A Receptacle Poem: One of a kind Aqua Marine Poems. Restructured from my original poem posted in 2016.

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Date: 3/21/2024 1:41:00 PM
Awesome poetry AM. I have a feeling Charlotte would like this one. Rich in symbolism
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Date: 4/1/2024 3:51:00 PM
Thank you, Tom. Appreciate your encouraging comment and visit... ((Hugs))
Date: 2/28/2024 10:18:00 AM
wow, what a great metaphor for a heart once loved now broken. i enjoyed this one.
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Date: 2/28/2024 9:48:00 PM
Hi Andrea, lovely to see you here, and your comment much appreciated! Yes, and it took time to understand, only chance we have is to put our hearts back together again. Love in all it's empathetic, compassionate "forms" is a precious commodity. When hearts are devalued, broken, we can put it back together again, because love itself, even self love, heals broken hearts.<3 Big Hug!
Date: 2/19/2024 9:47:00 AM
Your imagery and emotions induce a poet to think deeply to understand its poetic meaning.
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Date: 2/20/2024 12:20:00 PM
I appreciate very much your thoughtfulness-I understand it as coming from a non judgemental place in a caring heart. :)
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Date: 2/20/2024 12:09:00 PM
Thank you so much, Victor, that's the way I feel too, when reading the poems here on PS. Through the ages, artists of all genres have "spoken" about people "with feelings like ourselves" whether through art, song, poetry, play acting, writing. Humans have left their handprints on cave walls, their sins exposed in the Bible, their human needs in myths and fairy tales, their history in photographs, their names, birth and death dates on tombstones... We want to know the human being behind the poem, and the name. You are welcome to soup mail, if you need a more in depth analysis of this poem. (((Warm Hugs)))
Date: 2/18/2024 4:04:00 PM
such a poignant poem with depth and creative imagery. I especially liked these lines: Dustpan holds bits and pieces... Impulse to throw away Hesitation- thoughtful ancient wisdom whispers, Your poem was a delight to read. Have a great evening, Sara
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Date: 2/18/2024 10:59:00 PM
2) Yet he is so willing to put our sins out of mind, "as far away as the sunrise is from the sunset..." gold is a rare metal resistant to tarnishing. It is malleable, highly valued. Yet Wisdom and Faith are "better than gold". (Psalm 19:7-10. 1Peter 1:6,7) I just keep trying my best... Hope your week is a Beautiful One-you deserve it! ((Warm Hugs)) Aqua M
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Date: 2/18/2024 10:38:00 PM
Dearest Sara, I always find your touching comments down to earth, relatable, yet your spiritual and emotional insight into the "human" condition of imperfection, is soooooo soothing. I deeply appreciate your heart warming, calming, "touch." The lines you liked, are the kernel thoughts of the poem... God does everything in his power to save us, without taking away our free will to choose. It must be very hurtful to him, when we "reject" his Love. He expressed his hurt in his Word too.
Date: 2/18/2024 11:22:00 AM
Your poignant poem beautifully captures the journey of love, loss, and resilience through vivid imagery and emotional depth. The symbolism of the heart-shaped gift, inscribed with "Love's Everlasting Hopes," poignantly portrays the sincerity and vulnerability of the giver's affection, cherished by the recipient next to the front door, a symbol of home and heart.. Nicely done dear..
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Date: 2/18/2024 1:45:00 PM
Thank you for your welcome visit and comment, SO. Much appreciated, indeed. (((Warm Hugs...))) Aqua.
Date: 2/18/2024 4:17:00 AM
A good chance for tending to, letting God take control of your priceless artifact of heart. Sad, when humans shatter other humans though.
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Date: 2/18/2024 10:57:00 AM
We are poets on this poetry soup stage, speaking to the fourth wall, knowing our words will have an effect on our audience, good or bad. As yours did when I read them. It's about humans needing connection, and to communicate with each other. Sitting around a fire, sharing stories, experiences, wisdom is common cultural behavior all over the world. I love it!
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Date: 2/18/2024 10:50:00 AM
2) Took me the best part of 60++years to work it all out-one baby step at a time. My sons and I have deep discussions about breaking, or burning the cycle handed down through hundreds of years of familial history. We have love, peace, compassion, collaboration in our little family. It's taken dedication, mercy, sacrifice, hope, faith in inherent goodness, and prayer. I am free to fix my precious being with God's Help.
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Date: 2/18/2024 10:39:00 AM
He hears us, even when we don't listen with our ears(just my own personal experience... :)) Personal research has shown me I had a choice to leave, CO-dependancy was my addiction. I say "was," because a trauma bond "love addiction" can be overcome, once your eyes are opened. My heart was not "whole" in the first place - environmentally nurtured, and genetic disorders were in place before I was born.
Date: 2/17/2024 11:34:00 PM
Kintsugi: metaphor for embracing your flaws and imperfections. From Japanese: kin (gold) +tsugi (join) Traditional Japanese art that involves repairing broken pottery using lacquer with gold, silver, platinum. The idea is that broken objects are not inherently worthless, their brokenness can be seen as a part of their history and beauty. Does God feel the same about imperfect humans? "His power is made perfect in weakness" - 2Corinthians12:19. <3 With Love, Hope, Faith. 1Corinthians 13:1-13
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