The Rebellious Bard's Satire

Bard...
angry,
rebellious;
fearless of death,
refusing to appease the King's request!


"How
dare you,
minstrel
of humble birth,
deny me the joyful praises, which delight  me?"


"Haven't
I paid
a huge sum
of my treasure,
for the odes to laud my powerful dynasty?


"O
foolish
king, gold and
power cannot
buy the mind of a bard, who's seen bloodshed!"


"You
call me 
unworthy
of wearing this
glorious crown, which governs an empire?"


"No...
my lord,
you're the king,
of mightiness 
on this vast island, but you lack wisdom!"


"So
strip me
of title,
of vainglory...
and send me to die in the cold dungeon!" 


Entered in Brian Strand's Fiive & Twenty contest

Copyright 2009 by Andrew Crisci
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Golden Avatar
October 7, 2009 at 11:42 PM
This, Andrew, is a sure winner! Wonderful Tetractys! Donna
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October 4, 2009 at 11:40 PM
Interesting write. Keep writing. Sara
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September 30, 2009 at 11:40 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest Andrew.Rgds Brian
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September 30, 2009 at 1:03 PM
Justified tension in this dialogue between the king and the bard. Royalty to this day will tolerate nothing but loyalty to their reign. Even in America, if we speak our mind, we risk retribution. Great work, Andrew! Love, Carolyn
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September 30, 2009 at 11:28 AM
Wishing you the best in Brian's contest Andrew. Love, Carol
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