The Reasons Why

If I ever took my life
What would I say
What could I say
That might explain
The reasons why
I chose to die

Was it the loneliness I felt
Friends lost and gone
The men I couldnt get love from
Parents forever unimpressed
by grades, behaviour, 
The way I dressed.
Overwhelmed by essays, reports
Upcoming tests, presentations, all sorts
Sleepless nights worried and stressed
Crying, lamenting, anxious, depressed
Not pleased with reflections
Failed attempts at corrections
No further directions
Feeling insecure
On show, exposed and raw
Caught in the night
Throat strangled tight
Can't call for help
Or rely on myself
Feelings unshared
Running from fears
Drowning in tears
And nobody knows that I'm here...

I wonder...
If I ever took my life
Is this what I would say
And could it would it 
Find a way 
To explain
The reasons why
I chose to die

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 3/12/2017 11:32:00 PM
You have expressed many reasons why one would take their life, but I don't think any of them are reason enough. I officiate and speak at funerals for a living, and have officiated a number of funerals for suicide victims. When I visit with the families that have been affected, all I see is devastation. I know if the suicide victim could see what I see, they never would have committed the act. Your poem is excellent because it has brought out many emotion in me. Well done!
Login to Reply
Date: 4/2/2016 4:40:00 PM
I don't think any reason is a good reason. Taide... just about Everyone writes about suicide, but no one takes the moment to give good reason. Awesome poem... I give it a high 7. Linda
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter
Hide Ad