Joanna Daniel Poet Monorhyme

The Reason For Our Vitality

God is the Lord of all humanity,
And the reason for our vitality;
When we ignore Him, there's insanity,
Volcanity, lack of morality,
Senseless brutality, profanity,
That leads mankind towards fatality;

Today, we're lacking in urbanity,
Because of no open mentality.
To trust in riches is inanity.
Believing Christ needs no formality,
He's the Way to heav'n, not mundanity,
Accept it or not, that's reality.


01-24-17

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Sunita U.D Palawon February 6, 2017 at 8:47 PM Well done and congrats on the POTD. Fantastic use of given words. :)

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri February 2, 2017 at 11:28 AM So true , wow awesome and inspiring!!! God sure is the reason for our vitality, and without Him there's only insanity and lack of morality like u rhymed in meaningfully. I love religious poems so I feel so happy poetrysoup appreciates this such that u get a well deserved 'poem of the day honour'. Kudos. Congrats!!! And hapy new yr.

John Hamilton January 31, 2017 at 11:22 AM Nice write Jo, congrats on POTD, missed this one! Must have done well in the contest! Belief is a good first step, but real faith is the hard part, sadly lacking in this world.

Sandra Haight January 26, 2017 at 7:16 AM Your Monorhyme using the special words is amazing, Jo, along with the powerful spiritual message your poem imparts. Congratulations on your well-deserved Poem of the Day honor! Hugs, Sandra Joanna Daniel January 27, 2017 at 3:49 AM Thank you, Sandra:)

Anne-Lise Andresen January 25, 2017 at 2:12 PM -Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. Jo !!!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Joanna Daniel January 26, 2017 at 1:23 AM Thank you, Sunshine:)

Connie Marcum Wong January 25, 2017 at 2:09 PM I remember this beauty Jo. I know I left a comment, but I don't see it here. I was amazed how smoothly you integrated all the words into your poem. Big Congratulations on having it honored as POTD! 7 ; ) Joanna Daniel January 26, 2017 at 1:24 AM Thank you, Connie:)

Daniel Turner January 25, 2017 at 9:59 AM Hey! Look at you:) Back to say congratulations, Jo, for POTD honors. Much deserved. Joanna Daniel January 26, 2017 at 1:26 AM Thank you, Daniel:)

Eve Roper January 25, 2017 at 9:43 AM Wonderful write, Daniel, you have used the words very spiritually.. Congratulations on Poem of the day well deserved Hugs eve Joanna Daniel January 26, 2017 at 1:26 AM Thank you, Eve:)

Freddie Robinson Jr. January 25, 2017 at 9:34 AM A glowing testimony, Jo. Expressed brilliantly. I love this poem. Kudos for getting POTD. Love and joy to you. Joanna Daniel January 26, 2017 at 1:26 AM Thank you, Freddie:)

Akkina Downing January 25, 2017 at 9:18 AM This is an awesome piece, perfect message to what's going on in this world. Congratulations on potd :) Joanna Daniel January 26, 2017 at 1:27 AM Thank you, Akkina:)

Charlie Smith January 25, 2017 at 8:37 AM Congratulations Jo for POTD honors, great subject matter and execution... Joanna Daniel January 26, 2017 at 1:27 AM Thank you, Charlie:)

Chris Green January 25, 2017 at 8:12 AM Hey there, congrats my friend on POTD. A perfect choice. Joanna Daniel January 26, 2017 at 1:27 AM Thank you, Chris:)

Alexis Y. January 25, 2017 at 7:54 AM Hi Jo, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was most definitely well deserved: -) Alexis Joanna Daniel January 26, 2017 at 1:28 AM Thank you, Alexis:)

Winged Warrior January 25, 2017 at 7:12 AM Jo...what vivacity!...congrats!!! on potd...god bless...WW Joanna Daniel January 26, 2017 at 1:28 AM Thank you, WW:)

Agnes Krampe January 25, 2017 at 6:37 AM Congrats on POTD, Jo. Joanna Daniel January 26, 2017 at 1:29 AM Thank you, Agnes:)

Neo Masetlane January 25, 2017 at 4:17 AM a round of applause, great rhyme, wow congrats on the POTD** Joanna Daniel January 26, 2017 at 1:29 AM Thank you, Neo:)

White Wolf January 24, 2017 at 12:59 PM And you make it look so easy, Jo! Well done and good luck /|\ Joanna Daniel January 26, 2017 at 1:31 AM Life in Christ is easy for He will guide you, White wolf:) Thank you:)

Chris Green January 24, 2017 at 10:22 AM What a fantastic poem for entry in the contest. You have taken the words provided to an entirely higher level my friend. What a beautiful, truthful and uplifting poem you have penned.

Daniel Turner January 24, 2017 at 10:05 AM Great poem for contest, Jo. You passed this challenge with flying colors:)

Judy Ball January 24, 2017 at 9:31 AM Bravo Jo. I do love a poem with a message and this is excellent. Love it and thanks for this inspiring piece. From 1 to 7 this is a 10. With your permission I would like to keep this to share with my daughter. God Bless, JB Joanna Daniel January 25, 2017 at 2:58 AM Sure, Judy:) I'm glad if my poem can be of any help:) thank you:) all glory be to God:)

John Fleming January 24, 2017 at 8:17 AM Indeed it is a Godless world we live in...Whatever the fanatical fundamentalists and bloodthirsty extremists may care to believe. My very best regards to you, Jo! :) john Joanna Daniel January 26, 2017 at 1:33 AM True, John:) thank you for your kind visit:)

Alexis Y. January 24, 2017 at 7:57 AM Hi Jo, Well done and well said. What a well written inspirational write . It was filled with wisdom and truth. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. A without a doubt seven and a fav:-) Alexis

Richard Lamoureux January 24, 2017 at 7:11 AM Amen, well said. Joanna Daniel January 26, 2017 at 1:32 AM Thank you, Richard:)