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The Reaping

Tonight it's late Something pure of hate The full of night Here to give us fright In darkness and of murk An evil creature lurks Cornfields Full of crops and yield Here them weep As it's time to reap Devil's allegiance Here to seek vengeance Get sucked here within This is not a sin You'll hear children cry As you pass by You'll hear women moan As you pass this lawn And as you pass this lot He'll cut Your gut Dancing Turning Dancing Turning Just like a newly wed Just like you don't have a head Go home early I've almost cut you nearly There's nothing here That's what you think Cuddled in your fear My scythe will sink When you hear the sound of the crows It's the sign you to go home now.
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Date: 7/10/2013 12:55:00 PM
Haunting, creepy and VERY well done...Like something out of Stephen King book (Has the torch been passed?) - Tim
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Date: 6/28/2013 9:25:00 PM
aha! Nato, often ur notion is filled of massive affliction and the cage of little voice in ur heart can't come out but by ur piece really hits the heart, it's a big SHOUT! cool subject here! Nice one!
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Date: 6/20/2013 11:14:00 AM
- Nato, a very well written poem - deep thoughts.... - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/12/2013 4:33:00 PM
You have a raw talent very visual in it's lines but if I may say choose your words just a little better and this could be a 7 write.
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Date: 6/12/2013 2:37:00 PM
hey my fellow little addict friend, this one sure has a great tone for a quiet kind of horror creeping up on someone. great how you ended with the crow's call.
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Date: 6/12/2013 10:51:00 AM
A ballade full of obscure images of fear and danger, somethimg occurring in dark dreams. Excellent
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Date: 6/12/2013 4:28:00 AM
I love the shape you has created and this poem gives one lots to ponder about..Well done
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Date: 6/12/2013 3:48:00 AM
deep, provoking. well written
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