The Reapers Song

The midnight moon was full of woe
 As ravens soared within its glow
 Echoes of the reaper's song
 Drift on dark clouds all night long

 She who plays is dressed in black
 and as her threnody meanders through the mist
 the caw of ravens echo back,
  On these the reaper does subsist

 Her violin sows sorrow and despair
 And reaps a river filled with tears
  Her beauty belies her deadly tune
 So sweet the sound to charm the moon
  
 The thickening mist obscures the moon
 Death's melody plays on, without regret
 The fallen, through the fields are strewn,
 And many more souls will pay their debt
                      --
 4/6/17
 Contest: The Poets Shadow
 Sponsor: Greg Barden
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Cozart Avatar
May 28, 2017 at 1:13 PM
beautiful. congrats.
Stebbings Avatar
May 28, 2017 at 5:15 AM
Wow, very dark and sensuous. Well deserved win with this Quatrain, Joseph.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 27, 2017 at 11:13 PM
Sad and lovely at the same time! Congrats, Joseph! A wow!
Scars Avatar
May 27, 2017 at 10:21 PM
Joseph, I loved this. Poems like this one is what I enjoy the most, deep full of amazing metaphorical language. You always astound me with your beautiful verses. thank you and congrats :)
May Avatar
May 28, 2017 at 6:19 AM
Thank you for those kind words Laura and thank you for my placement...
Smith Avatar
May 9, 2017 at 8:06 PM
Yes very dark, I'm a fan of the dark though!!! Nice job again!!
Vaso Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 9:13 PM
Very very well written, I love this kind of poetry!
Dietrich Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 8:41 PM
wow this got better and better and that last stanza. Magnifique!
Gupta Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 6:07 AM
The rhythmic flow is very soothing ... a joyous read ... enjoyed the images too ...
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