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It was late at night and the thunder roared. A bright flash of light across the sky now soared. The rain poured down and the cold winds howled. He saw a hooded old man with a scythe and a scowl. His journey of life was near the end of its run. He now looked back on all he had done. The reaper now stood just ten feet away. He had some cards on a table with just one game to play. If you’re up for the task you can return anew. Win this game of chance and there will be nothing you can’t do. Your life will reset and your future will shine. Just pick one card that’s better than mine. If you should lose, your soul I will take. Your teeth I’ll grind and your bones I will break. Once you take a seat there is no turning back. Make the right choice or face my attack. December 9, 2020 Word Count: 158 Fantasy with fictional beings Poetry Contest Sponsor: Caren Krutsinger

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Date: 1/4/2021 8:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a write. Enjoy your win. Today,have joy/blessings.........................
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Mark Koplin
Date: 1/4/2021 11:13:00 AM
Thanks! Have a great day!
Date: 1/3/2021 2:44:00 PM
Congratulations, Mark, on your great placement for this well-deserving, creative piece!!
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Mark Koplin
Date: 1/4/2021 5:25:00 AM
Thanks Newton!
Date: 1/3/2021 1:19:00 PM
A fantastic scary poem/story Mark, congratulations on your win in the contest. Belle
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Mark Koplin
Date: 1/4/2021 5:25:00 AM
Thanks Belle! Have a good day!
Date: 1/3/2021 10:19:00 AM
Congratulations on you awesome win, Mark , great creative scary story. Hugs Eve
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Mark Koplin
Date: 1/4/2021 5:24:00 AM
Thanks Eve I greatly appreciate that!
Date: 12/11/2020 8:45:00 AM
Such vivid imagery you paint to captivate the readers...life is filled with choices..nicely penned
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Mark Koplin
Date: 12/11/2020 6:16:00 PM
Thank you so much Melissa! I appreciate your gracious comment.
Date: 12/10/2020 6:39:00 PM
Crikey Mark … a scary version of Russian Roulette. You wouldn’t want to choose the two of spades - thanks Mark - Lindsay
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Mark Koplin
Date: 12/11/2020 2:12:00 AM
I don’t think I would play any games with that dude
Date: 12/9/2020 6:37:00 PM
What a choice! Playing with the reaper is a deadly game.
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Mark Koplin
Date: 12/10/2020 5:26:00 AM
Indeed! Thanks for reading Kim! I hope you have a wonderful day
Date: 12/9/2020 6:20:00 PM
WOW Mark! Makes me feel sad and scared and the same time! Kafka said we should read poetry that disturbs like this. Great job!
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Mark Koplin
Date: 12/10/2020 12:33:00 PM
Usually if I post something dark nobody comments on it. Thanks for that.
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Jennifer Fenn
Date: 12/10/2020 10:50:00 AM
Frank Kafka is a famous German/Czech writer who lived the last half of 1800s and first part of 1900s, I believe.
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Mark Koplin
Date: 12/10/2020 5:27:00 AM
It’s just fiction for entertainment. Who’s Kafka?

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