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The Reaper

It was late at night and the thunder roared.
A bright flash of light across the sky now soared.
The rain poured down and the cold winds howled.
He saw a hooded old man with a scythe and a scowl.

His journey of life was near the end of its run.
He now looked back on all he had done.
The reaper now stood just ten feet away.
He had some cards on a table with just one game to play.

If you’re up for the task you can return anew.
Win this game of chance and there will be nothing you can’t do.
Your life will reset and your future will shine.
Just pick one card that’s better than mine.

If you should lose, your soul I will take.
Your teeth I’ll grind and your bones I will break.
Once you take a seat there is no turning back.
Make the right choice or face my attack.

December 9, 2020
Word Count: 158
Fantasy with fictional beings Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Caren Krutsinger
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Goldsmith Avatar
January 4, 2021 at 8:22 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a write. Enjoy your win. Today,have joy/blessings.........................
Koplin Avatar
January 4, 2021 at 11:13 AM
Thanks! Have a great day!
Ranaweera  Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 2:44 PM
Congratulations, Mark, on your great placement for this well-deserving, creative piece!!
Koplin Avatar
January 4, 2021 at 5:25 AM
Thanks Newton!
Edmonds  Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 1:19 PM
A fantastic scary poem/story Mark, congratulations on your win in the contest. Belle
Koplin Avatar
January 4, 2021 at 5:25 AM
Thanks Belle! Have a good day!
Roper Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 10:19 AM
Congratulations on you awesome win, Mark , great creative scary story. Hugs Eve
Koplin Avatar
January 4, 2021 at 5:24 AM
Thanks Eve I greatly appreciate that!
Tracy Avatar
December 11, 2020 at 8:45 AM
Such vivid imagery you paint to captivate the readers...life is filled with choices..nicely penned
Koplin Avatar
December 11, 2020 at 6:16 PM
Thank you so much Melissa! I appreciate your gracious comment.
Laurie Avatar
December 10, 2020 at 6:39 PM
Crikey Mark … a scary version of Russian Roulette. You wouldn’t want to choose the two of spades - thanks Mark - Lindsay
Koplin Avatar
December 11, 2020 at 2:12 AM
I don’t think I would play any games with that dude
Rodrigues Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 6:37 PM
What a choice! Playing with the reaper is a deadly game.
Koplin Avatar
December 10, 2020 at 5:26 AM
Indeed! Thanks for reading Kim! I hope you have a wonderful day
Fenn Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 6:20 PM
WOW Mark! Makes me feel sad and scared and the same time! Kafka said we should read poetry that disturbs like this. Great job!
Koplin Avatar
December 10, 2020 at 12:33 PM
Usually if I post something dark nobody comments on it. Thanks for that.
Fenn Avatar
December 10, 2020 at 10:50 AM
Frank Kafka is a famous German/Czech writer who lived the last half of 1800s and first part of 1900s, I believe.
Koplin Avatar
December 10, 2020 at 5:27 AM
It’s just fiction for entertainment. Who’s Kafka?
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