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Not to bad.  Better than I thought.

Exciting extreme exclamation Caught climatic conversation Next week major VALUABLE VALID VACATION. Realistic and simplistic. This is the real world. It's what you want it to be. Could it be? TV is on. Relaxing reacting Satire implying LIFE'S A BEACH. BUT seriously if you do Things out of anger. Then life it self is a danger. Despite all of that detail This is the. Real world. Isn't it? When you've had good rest Greet the one in the MIRROR Early morning stranger Aah, information of VACATIONS IS IN order. White sands BLUE WATERS Virgin islands!! Or Hawaii , oh I'm smilin' ALOHA Time for sand in my hair. PALM TREES! Sandals on my feet . Me as free as nature in the BREEZE. Hold on now. Full forge ahead. THE EMPIRE IS DESIRED.

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Date: 6/29/2016 2:46:00 PM
Val, I like the look and idea....Linda
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Date: 10/5/2023 6:32:00 AM
Yeah I know this is a very very late response, but I didn't check back until Now. Thank you for your comment Poet Destroyer A. Peace! VBR black panther

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