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The Real Revolution

The real revolution is silent. Quiet. The real revolution deafens. Defeats. Each revolutionary is a rock. Pure stone. Together a wall of dissidence, begging to save their battered innocence. The clock ticks so quickly the message lost in a spinning trajectory; Make ‘the man’ your minion, take the drum and smash him with it. The real revolution is loud. Menacing This revolution will change everything.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 4/11/2019 5:45:00 PM
Great write. It has an element of the surreal. Enjoyed immensely.
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Date: 4/9/2019 8:07:00 PM
What kind of revolution are you writing about? Not a violent one I hope. There are revolutions going on in the USA - changing attitudes among young people. Stimulating work! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Melani Udaeta
Date: 4/9/2019 8:20:00 PM
Consider it ‘alinea’ The beginning of a new train of thought. No. Not violent. Peace and love.

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