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The Real McCoy Androids Humanoid- Robotic Robots Feel them- touch them- real life fembots Soulless secretions a monster metallic A copy completion approaching organic Interacting in all moods they are set to please Sub servant or vampish programmed to tease Favoured by lust as love turns into dust A bodacious bust that someday will rust Providing human like- company for men Discard them-Leave them- again and again Love in a box the new carnal cosmetic clocks She shakes and she rocks and even dirty talks Hearts made of steel- don’t get broken Yours for the picking- Destiny has spoken She strikes a pose as you take off her clothes No need for a rose as you undress and expose Alas for us ladies the future is bleak Emotions are replaced- no more to speak A disheartened Delilah a gratifying Lady Godiva Unleashing a metal messiah a pandemic pariah. Aug.24.2017 Collab with a dear friend from down under...(((Maria Williams))) Thank you, Maria, for your exchange of words and poetic dance...it was great fun to collab with you...let's do it again soon...

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Date: 9/16/2017 11:13:00 AM
Congrats to both of you on POTD, this is a wonderfully conceived poem. I enjoyed your internal rhyme WW, even in a collab it is there shining bright. Well done, really a seamless write.
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Date: 9/1/2017 11:00:00 PM
Congratulations to both of you on having this wonderful poem honored as POTD! : )
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Maria Williams
Date: 9/11/2017 5:32:00 AM
Thanks so much Connie, always appreciate the love and support you have shown...Maria and WW
Date: 8/28/2017 6:09:00 PM
oh my, the future looks bleak indeed!! That is great you could do this one with maria.
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Maria Williams
Date: 8/30/2017 7:09:00 AM
Thank you so much Andrea, yes doesn't it? We really appreciate your visit and lovely comment ...Maria & WW
Date: 8/28/2017 7:52:00 AM
Oh this is truly is fun. Some great word mincing and rhymes. I truly enjoyed this you two. Congratulations on POTD!
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Maria Williams
Date: 8/28/2017 8:19:00 AM
Thank you so much Dean for stopping by, I knew you would like this. I really appreciate your support my friend...Maria and WW
Date: 8/25/2017 11:49:00 PM
Congrats to you both.A very deserving POTD! Amazing!! 80)
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Maria Williams
Date: 8/26/2017 12:23:00 AM
Thanks so much Pat, both for the visit and congrats....Maria & WW
Date: 8/25/2017 5:58:00 PM
It means smile with teeth showing. that's a white smile my friend :)
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Maria Williams
Date: 8/26/2017 12:30:00 AM
Akkina, he's got me eating pizza, and now looks like we've got to wear eclipse glasses for his dazzling smile as well. Gosh is there no end too this?...Maria
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Akkina Downing
Date: 8/25/2017 8:31:00 PM
Lol! Thanks :)
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Date: 8/25/2017 6:12:00 PM
Thank you for the enlightenment, my friend...I kinda knew but I wanted to see your response...and now a (((BIG))) white smile for you Akkina...you might need the eclipse glasses lol...god bless...^WW^
Date: 8/25/2017 12:14:00 PM
Back to congratulate you both on POTD Hugs ~*
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Date: 8/25/2017 12:43:00 PM
Thank you Eve...god bless...Maria & ^WW^
Date: 8/25/2017 11:09:00 AM
Hi WW and Maria, just dropping by with congratulations on your POTD, a deserved accolade for a an excellent collaboration. Way to go my friends. Your Friend always....Mike.
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Date: 8/25/2017 12:40:00 PM
Thank you Mike...god bless...Maria & ^WW^
Date: 8/25/2017 9:44:00 AM
Congratulations! I like to think this poem will have lasting readership as the future unfolds.
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Date: 8/25/2017 12:42:00 PM
Thank you so much Sunlite...for your kind words...god bless...Maria & ^WW^
Date: 8/25/2017 8:24:00 AM
Congratulations to Maria too! :)
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Date: 8/25/2017 9:01:00 AM
She thanks you too lol...god bless...from the both of us
Date: 8/25/2017 7:59:00 AM
Congratulations for POTD WW :)
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Date: 8/25/2017 8:21:00 AM
Thank you kindly Heidi...god bless...Maria & ^WW^
Date: 8/25/2017 7:22:00 AM
Thank you so much Maria...for letting me join you on such a wondrous adventure...with your brilliant idea on doing a poem about current and evolving future robots...you are an incredible poet/writer... I bow...god bless...^WW^
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Maria Williams
Date: 8/25/2017 7:42:00 AM
Oh so that's the secret!!
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Date: 8/25/2017 7:36:00 AM
You meant pizzas...I was hungry while writing lol
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Maria Williams
Date: 8/25/2017 7:26:00 AM
Oh WW, you know you added the pizzaz, You are such a wonderful poet, thank you. I look forward to working with you again my friend, God Bless...Maria xxx
Date: 8/25/2017 7:15:00 AM
- Wow ... a unique description ... wrapped in beautiful lines, W.W. and Maria - Excellent, poems of truth - Congratulations to both of you !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Maria Williams
Date: 8/25/2017 7:19:00 AM
Thank you so much for the lovely visit and comments my friend Anne- Lise , I really appreciate it. WW is an amazing poet....Maria xxx
Date: 8/25/2017 6:00:00 AM
This is a fun one dabbling in the possible real social implications of sex bots, great pen you two, congrats on potd! xomo x2 :)
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Date: 8/25/2017 7:13:00 AM
Thank you so much Maureen...god bless...Maria &^WW^
Date: 8/25/2017 5:48:00 AM
Returning to say congrats, WW!
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Maria Williams
Date: 8/25/2017 7:16:00 AM
Thank you so much Vijay both from WW and myself. A real fun collab it was. He is an amazing poet...Maria
Date: 8/25/2017 5:33:00 AM
Yey, a huge congrats to both of yous on your POTD! Hugs :)
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Date: 8/25/2017 7:12:00 AM
Thank you, my dear enthusiastic friend, lol...your comments make all the difference Akkina...god bless...Maria &^WW^
Date: 8/25/2017 1:58:00 AM
Depicting today's reality in a most creative way my dear friends! What a fantastic outcome it is! Unfortunately the truth of your prophetic poem is that human relationships the way our Lord has intended them to be are or will be lost. Congratulating both of you: WW and Maria for giving us food of thought!
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Maria Williams
Date: 8/25/2017 7:16:00 AM
Thank you so much my dearest friend Demetrios for the lovely visit and comment. I know how busy you are, we really appreciate it....Maria and WW
Date: 8/24/2017 8:15:00 PM
Holy Robotic, this was fantabulous! An absolute well done job you two. I love it! Oh gosh, I'm trying to think of something to make ^WW^ smile a white smile, that's if Robots knows how to smile... Lol! Well, did I get you smile a white one? Hugs my two awesome friends :)
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Date: 8/25/2017 1:59:00 PM
And yes Akkina...you always make me smile...a white smile...although I'm not too sure what that is lol...I'm white smiling right now lol...god bless...^WW^
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Maria Williams
Date: 8/25/2017 7:14:00 AM
Thank you so much Akkina both from WW and myself. A real fun collab it was. He is an amazing poet as you would know...Maria xxx
Date: 8/24/2017 2:58:00 PM
Love the collaboration^WW^, well written story ~*
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Date: 8/25/2017 7:03:00 AM
Thank you, Eve...god bless my friend...Maria &^WW^
Date: 8/24/2017 1:59:00 PM
This was such a great collaboration and so much fun to read! The same people who enjoy blowup dolls will enjoy the robots, but I feel people will always need that emotional response that is ingrained in all of us. There is nothing like the real thing!
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Maria Williams
Date: 8/25/2017 7:14:00 AM
Thank you so much Connie both from WW and myself. A real fun collab it was. He is an amazing poet...Maria
Date: 8/24/2017 11:31:00 AM
At least you won't have to remember birthdays or anniversary's anymore... Good one guys!
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Date: 8/25/2017 7:02:00 AM
Thank you, Charlie...I can't even remember my own birthday lol...Maria &^WW^
Date: 8/24/2017 11:17:00 AM
Very funny romp! Love it, WW!
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Maria Williams
Date: 8/25/2017 7:13:00 AM
Thank you so much Kim both from WW and myself. A real fun collab it was. He is an amazing poet...Maria
Date: 8/24/2017 10:57:00 AM
Hi WW, an excellent poem by you both. A seamless collaboration, the words dancing onto the canvas, painting your images. My congratulations to you both on a wonderful collab. This goes into my faves. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 8/25/2017 6:59:00 AM
Thank you Mike...long time no see...we have to change that my friend...god bless...Maria &^WW^
Date: 8/24/2017 6:56:00 AM
So well illustrated--the robots are slowly taking over--even love!! Well done WW!
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Maria Williams
Date: 8/25/2017 7:45:00 AM
Yes Vijay, a sad world that we live in, but lets hope that will only remain in the Science fiction world them taking over. Thank you for the visit and comment my friend...Maria and WW
Date: 8/24/2017 1:46:00 AM
Great collaboration and very appropo for today.
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Maria Williams
Date: 8/25/2017 7:13:00 AM
Thank you so much Carole both from WW and myself. A real fun collab it was. He is an amazing poet...Maria
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