The Real Mccoy

He walked outside the mirror of 
solitude, 
And greeted with the purest of 
stares. 
Confused by this clairvoyant twin, my 
fearful color was intact; 
I awaited his response, and he spoke in familiar 
tongue these following passions. 

He spoke of that Sagittarius moon he 
celebrates, 
when the 22nd day presents itself. 
In earlier episodes of himself,
he continuously advanced through blind
hallways, 
with no afterthought of the internal flame, 
potentially burning in his honor. 
He revealed sketches of himself, that await 
discovery. 

The silent preacher remains his 
title, 
yet with every curious ear, 
his history is awarded audible. 
He became an unwritten author a 
lifetime ago, 
a sigh of relief was expressed, 
as he became every metaphor, 
thereby regaining those thoughts 
of yesterday. 

He still dreams of that fatherly 
silhouette. 
A favorite thought of tomorrow, 
to borrow a voice, from this male 
influence, 
now absent from land. 

The thought of plural skies visits him 
constantly, 
he’s never forgotten the idea of unity, 
although on occasion, 
it’s faded portrait appears fictional. 
He awaits his inspiration in 
reality. 

Those white walls that surround him in 
military stance, 
are assumed to be his only company. 
However, he’s confident in his legacy, found in 
similar souls. 

After exposing this identity of truth, he felt 
completed, 
I too, became a turning stone. 
Before retreating, I asked for the word, that 
complimented his image, 
He simply thought Jiril.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A. Sharma Avatar
November 4, 2014 at 8:34 PM
Excellent pen Jiril ! Congrats on huge win!
Clemons Avatar
November 5, 2014 at 2:34 PM
Thanks Dr. Upma
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November 4, 2014 at 9:23 AM
Brilliantly penned poem Jiril. Congratulations on your win.
Clemons Avatar
November 4, 2014 at 6:00 PM
Thanks Brenda.
Mehta Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 7:30 PM
Amazing pen picture, congrats on the win, Jiril
Clemons Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 7:44 PM
Thanks Dr. Ram.
Yvonne Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 1:04 PM
Congratulations Jiril on your well deserved win.
Clemons Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 3:45 PM
Thank you Maurice. Appreciate the love.
Lamoureux Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 11:24 PM
One of the best I have read on the soup.
Clemons Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 11:26 PM
Appreciate it, Richard.
Curtis Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 4:32 PM
Wow Jiril, This is very poetic, Nice style.
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October 12, 2014 at 2:06 PM
Thank you, Jerry. Appreciate the love.
Shirey Avatar
July 5, 2014 at 12:50 PM
I love poems that tell a story :) great work! - Seth
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July 5, 2014 at 3:02 PM
Thanks Seth. Appreciate the love.
Tanner Avatar
May 30, 2014 at 7:46 PM
Good stuff, it keeps you engaged throughout. "He revealed sketches of himself, that await discovery." That line's killer in my opinion. Nice work.
Clemons Avatar
May 30, 2014 at 8:19 PM
Thank you, L. James. Appreciate the love.
Palmer Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 7:10 PM
well done Jiril,I saw a little of me in your poetry,great write bro
Clemons Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 10:54 PM
Thanks Richard. Appreciate the love.
Montalbo Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 12:07 PM
Mmmmmm.. Very well very well Jiril... Smiles Gina
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May 20, 2014 at 12:17 PM
Thanks Gina. Appreciate the love.
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