The Raven Seccumbs

In an Arctic world
So white, flies black
The Ravens rule
Is there a turning back

For the Queen of darkness
Against the white
Naked and kneeling
Has the dark turned to light

For on a branch there perches
Her Lieutenant so strong
For in the distance The Murder
Fly from

A changing world
Where the black is in demise
When its princess
Kneels down and cries

The white has now melted
The only black is night
What turned this dark princess
From her black to our white

We will only know
When her black stays away
And the night is so natural
But the light is our say




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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 3/9/2010 4:06:00 PM
Another amazing poem from your gifted pen James and always a treat to read ..happy there will be more coming to entertain us all..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 3/8/2010 1:16:00 PM
Lovely poem,may all the light erase all darkness..through these fantasy wonderful poems,you are able to send a message James..you should write a book..I love this poem,again..Charma
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Date: 3/8/2010 1:01:00 PM
YOu are good at your fantasy, James. and thanks for your kind comment t me today. LUv ya, andrea ps. What is this I hear about your leaving Soup? CAn you tell me why??
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Date: 3/7/2010 7:33:00 PM
Sounds like folklore, I love the feel of this one James! Your poetry always is an anjoyable read. ~Trudy~
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Date: 3/7/2010 4:24:00 PM
Interesting thoughts that you have penned in this one. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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