The Ramayana

Ramayana, a Hindu epic, 
written by saint Valmiki, in Sanskrit
one of the two largest ancient epics,
the first ever poem ever created
many many centuries ago.
It  depicts story of Lord Rama 
as a kind, fair, brave, soft spoken, 
handsome prince, who had
the kind benevolence of gods.
Himself an avatar of lord Vishnu
he was bestowed with divine,
powerful weapons of gods
to be used to fight evil forces.
He won over his consort, Sita, 
daughter of King Janak, 
in a 'swayamvar', a competition.
Keeping the tradition of honouring 
a given word or promise at all costs, 
a tradition of his sun god lineage
he went to forest for fourteen years
obeying his father, King Dashrath
and forsake the throne of Ayodhya 
for his younger brother Bharata, 
as demanded by Queen Kaikayi, 
the mother of Bharatha. 
He went to forests
with Sita and younger brother Lakshman.
There, he often killed many demons 
who had terrorised and killed saints worshipping
 peacefully in their holy monasteries, 
 on latter's requests.
In the 14th year of his banishment,
along with younger brother Lakshman,
with help from his follower Hanuman,
and, King of monkeys, Sugreev, 
he fought with King of Lanka, Ravana
a demon King, who had kidnapped Sita
and had wanted to marry her.
After this victory of right over wrong,
and freeing Sita and killing Ravana
he returned to his kingdom Ayodhya
and became the king himself theteafter.
Ramayana, steeped in morality, 
depicts duties of relationships, 
portraying characters, ideal in nature,
like ideal son, ideal father, ideal servant,
ideal brother, ideal husband and ideal king. 
Ramayana has greatly influenced 
Hindu poetry, life and culture, thereafter.
Presenting teachings of ancient Hindu sages
in narrative allegory, it intermixes
philosophical and ethical elements. 
The characters of Rama, Sita, Lakshman,
Hanuman, Ravana are still revered and worshipped, 
in some of the culturally conscious
South and East Asian nations even today.
Two great Hindu festivals,
Dussehra and Deepawali 
are celebrated to mark the victory of good over evil,  
in India and elsewhere
with fervor and gaiety, every year.

8.6.2020

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Date: 6/29/2020 2:37:00 PM
Hello Mohan Chutani, wow! I have enjoyed this narrative poem. it has history of the past. Very interesting, Enjoy your day my firend.
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Date: 6/29/2020 6:23:00 AM
A super write Mohan--kudos for this epic creation, and BIG congrats for climbing the best poems chart.
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Date: 6/29/2020 6:28:00 AM
Vijay, thankyou for your appreciation and encouragement. Mohan
Date: 6/19/2020 11:54:00 AM
Your narrative is as beautiful as it is inspirational, Mohan. I enjoyed the enlightenment it provided. Congratulations on your wonderful placement in John's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 6/29/2020 6:27:00 AM
Thankyou Susan for your appreciation and encouragement. Mohan
Date: 6/18/2020 11:56:00 PM
Nice narrative Mohan.. If we take the poetic aspects of Ramayana, I will say Valmiki is one of the best poet ever lived...His 24,000 slokas in Sanskrit are pure magical creations..
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Date: 6/29/2020 6:27:00 AM
Yes, agree with you Jenish. Mohan
Date: 6/18/2020 1:26:00 PM
Hello sir, Outstandingly written in brief..about one of our Epic ~"Ramayana". :-)You have beautifully narrated it.I love reading and watching the episodes in all the languages.Infact, watched the re -telecast show like you during this lockdown phase:-) Take care.Warm regards~Deepa
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Date: 6/29/2020 6:26:00 AM
Thankyou Deepa.
Date: 6/18/2020 11:20:00 AM
Nice write Mohan, congrats on placing!
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Date: 6/29/2020 6:25:00 AM
Thanks John for your appreciation. Mohan
Date: 6/10/2020 4:12:00 PM
So glad to read a narrative on The Ramayana on Poetry Soup :) I have a certain attachment to this epic since childhood. I believe so many morals in our society have a foundation here.
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/11/2020 10:22:00 AM
True, I had the occasion to see the serial re telecast recently during lockdown period. Still seemed fresh as new perspectives emerged. All Indians or humans can easily relate to it as it is so universal. Best. Mohan
Date: 6/10/2020 10:48:00 AM
Another great write, so educational for me. Thank you!... And it's interesting, I think, that the themes of the first poem (allegedly) written in 'Olde English,' 'Beowulf,' are strikingly similar to those you've narrated in 'The Ramayana.' Thank you again, Mohan! Take care, Gershon
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Date: 6/11/2020 10:19:00 AM
Thanks GW. Will try to read ' Beowulf' and see the similarities as suggested by you. Mohan
Date: 6/9/2020 1:38:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this poem on a scripture so holy. Best wishes. Rashi
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Date: 6/9/2020 2:07:00 AM
Thankyou Rashi. Stay blessed always. Mohan
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