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So blinding is the rain this black and lonely night; I now pull off the road- the deluge blanks my sight. With steady beats and pounds, like icy hail on roofs, its torrents loudly heard like giant, beastly hoofs. Inside my auto shell, afraid I wait alone, in this, my shelter now- although, without a phone. Like on a dead-end street, I feel abandoned, scared- on this dark country road, alone and unprepared. The steady, pounding rain- transports me now to tears entrapped in this small space with claustrophobic fears. The lightning streaks the sky, while thunder claps away; curled up like in a womb, upon the seat I lay. How monstrous is a storm that blocks the gift of light and works my adult mind to loneliness and fright. What fragile soul am I, afraid to be alone with nature's grand display- just praying to get home.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/27/2016 4:41:00 AM
Congrats Sandra, for your well, deserved top placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 7/24/2016 4:31:00 PM
many congrats on your win Sandra:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/24/2016 9:28:00 AM
Congrats Sandra to win. I sensed your isolation in Auto's shell. love
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Date: 7/24/2016 7:43:00 AM
Hi Sandra, Congrats on your 2 nd place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 7/24/2016 12:38:00 AM
Well done again Dear Sandra, congratulations ...
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Date: 7/23/2016 11:40:00 PM
Congratulations Sandra on the placement of the contest
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Date: 8/27/2015 4:14:00 AM
Sandra, Im glad to first comment,.. beautiful and graceful in every way,,hugs~~~~Olive eloisa =')
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/27/2015 6:49:00 PM
Hi Olive, so pleased that you like my poem. Thank you for stopping by with your positive comments! Hugs, Sandra

Book: Shattered Sighs