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The Rain's Laughter

The Moon full of rain, She shines like a disco ball; the storm's kiss claims us Thunder yells, enraged I grab the Umbrella, quick Soaking wet laughter. Pics 4 & 5.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/1/2013 2:32:00 PM
Great expressive and descriptive winning work..Enjoyed reading this one today..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 5/29/2013 3:33:00 PM
Congrats on your win. AO
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Date: 5/29/2013 1:16:00 AM
Nicely done!! Congrats on your win.
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Date: 5/28/2013 2:08:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest :"Kissing in the rain" - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/27/2013 7:18:00 PM
Melani. Thank you for the lovely pouring sound of your haiku, congratulations with your awesome kissing in the rain entry. * Love LINDA
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Date: 5/23/2013 12:18:00 PM
I love the 'moon full of rain' and 'storms kiss', vey clever xx
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