Raul Moreno Poet Choka

The Raining of Leaves

A cool Autumn breeze
Wilts the foliage of trees,
The leaves slowly fall.
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The leaves slowly fall 
Waving their way to the ground,
Wafting, side to side.
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Wafting, side to side
Dancing in an Autumn breeze,
The raining of leaves.

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Tyler Martin April 27, 2009 at 10:36 PM Clever title, again nice choka

Abe Lopez April 18, 2009 at 12:17 PM Lovely scene the raining of leaves.

Tyler Davis April 17, 2009 at 11:50 PM Describes fall to a 'T'.

Laurie Ginn April 9, 2009 at 7:36 PM I believe your nature poems are my favorites

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen April 9, 2009 at 6:22 PM Ooh, I like it. I can see the leaves floating down in the breeze. Nice write.

Maryam Jameela Haniff April 9, 2009 at 3:12 PM this is truly beautiful Raul...it brings a sense of pure piece to the reader's soul.....great work...as always....Maryam~

John Weber April 9, 2009 at 1:35 PM There's a delicate lilt in the language that works wonders here, Raul! For some reason, I perceive death sidling up with vast patience while humming a slow showtune. Man, I gotta lay off the caffeine! Warm regards, John.

Leon Wilson April 9, 2009 at 1:21 PM Another inspirational write but you had me at the beach and now you have taken me back, don't want to go to the cold again. God Bless. Leon

Frank F. Atanacio April 9, 2009 at 1:01 PM wonderful, masterful super write another gem

James Marshall Goff April 9, 2009 at 12:59 PM hypnotic, just vigorously shook my head after being blown away by this great poem! Raul, jmg