The Raindrop

A solar wind caresses the mighty oceans blue,
Creates the waves, stirs the hearts of the true.
The spirit leaves the sea and floats on high,
To gather the dreams that make poets sigh.
When they reach saturation they at last take flight,
In search of lovers, adrift in the darkest of night.
Each dream a raindrop that freefalls though time,
Each drop a perfection, each dream sublime,
A prism to the soul or perhaps an angel’s tear,
As it floats and drifts, through the atmosphere.
Its colour and shape so clear and fragile,
Yet set on its course despite all the toil.
To replenish the land, refresh us each and all,
Oblivious to their beauty as they tumble freefall.
Each bead of perfection races to shatter,
On the land, its people and all that matter.
To wash the dry soil, to cleanse the city,
To grow the crops, dull the gritty.
Yet fail to heed its might and splendour,
When it can destroy, kill and can render.
There’s sorrow in those raindrops, so to glee,
It’s visible in its beauty-beast so plain to see.
As it gives life as it dies, a true resurrection,
The raindrop can certainly be a cruel perfection.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 9/7/2013 11:10:00 AM
BEAUTIFUL PIECE OF WRITING
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Seosamh De Burca
Date: 9/9/2013 6:54:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by to read and comment.
Date: 7/7/2013 12:27:00 PM
beautiful !!
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Seosamh De Burca
Date: 7/9/2013 1:47:00 PM
Thank you very much for reading and commenting on my poem. :-)
Date: 6/11/2013 2:51:00 PM
This a delightful journey on words. SuZ
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Seosamh De Burca
Date: 6/14/2013 1:44:00 PM
Hi thank you for reading and your kind comment.
Date: 6/7/2013 10:16:00 PM
Nice combination of descriptive words and rhyming. Well done!
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Seosamh De Burca
Date: 6/8/2013 3:42:00 PM
Thank you for reading and leaving an encouraging comment.
Date: 6/6/2013 8:55:00 PM
Very true, rain can be devastating or a blessing....wonderfully written..
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Seosamh De Burca
Date: 6/7/2013 3:47:00 PM
Thank you for reading and leaving a positive comment on my poem.
Date: 6/2/2013 2:15:00 PM
Very expressive, descriptive and unique work that you have penned in this great poem..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Seosamh De Burca
Date: 6/3/2013 12:56:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comment.
Date: 6/2/2013 10:38:00 AM
A symphony of inspiring expressions with physical descriptions and metaphysical connotations inviting the soul to sing along the magic of poetry and life!
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Seosamh De Burca
Date: 6/3/2013 12:57:00 PM
Hi and thank you for your very generous comment on my poem.
Date: 5/30/2013 8:11:00 PM
this is so pretty, and yet so something else. I love it! ~SKAT~
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Seosamh De Burca
Date: 5/31/2013 6:54:00 AM
Hi, thank you for reading and leaving a comment :)
Date: 5/29/2013 1:28:00 AM
You write beautifully!!
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Seosamh De Burca
Date: 5/29/2013 8:12:00 AM
Thank you for your generous comment and taking the time to read my poem.
Date: 5/28/2013 2:06:00 PM
I admire d intellectual way u pennd dis poem! When they reach saturation and other lines make it a fabulous to read poem!
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Seosamh De Burca
Date: 5/29/2013 8:11:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comment and taking the time to ring my poem.
Date: 5/28/2013 1:35:00 PM
Indeed. Beauty with truth worded nicely. Thanks.....,loved always, bl
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Seosamh De Burca
Date: 5/29/2013 8:11:00 AM
Hi and thanks for taking the time to read my poem and comment.
Date: 5/27/2013 5:48:00 PM
excellent write Seosamh......I love it..."to gather the dreams that make poets sigh"... I love that line
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Seosamh De Burca
Date: 5/28/2013 12:20:00 PM
Hi Joseph, thank you for reading and taking the time to comment, its greatly appreciated.
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