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The sullen wind and the rain thundered, and withdrawing my dripping cloak, I let my damp hair fall, going to him, I made my smooth white shoulder bare, my raven hair tangled, I whispered, "I love you" . . . I had come through the night to be with him, he stroked my cheek and wound my hair in his fingers, kissing my throat as I closed my eyes, his lips burned with his love . . . My head, he clasped to his thundering chest, and his tears came falling down, we stayed together all the night long, and still we have not stirred . . . _____________________________ November 11, 2012 Poetry/Verse/The Rain Thundered Copyright Protected, ID 12-1005-582-0 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest, End Of Mar 2018 Sponsor Brian Strand Second Place

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Date: 3/24/2018 10:57:00 PM
Beautiful imagery. Congrats on your top win, BW.
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Date: 3/23/2018 9:56:00 AM
Yes so loving write congratulation on your win
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Date: 3/22/2018 9:24:00 PM
So much passion! Lovely ink. Congratulations on your win! xomo
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Date: 3/22/2018 9:00:00 AM
Descriptive and passionate. I pictured a scene from a movie while reading. Great imagery.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 3/22/2018 3:26:00 PM
Congrats on your win!
Date: 3/22/2018 5:40:00 AM
Dark and lovely, Constance! A great piece of poetry!
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Date: 3/21/2018 10:22:00 PM
Evocative. . . draws a Twilight scene to mind. Well Done You!
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Date: 3/21/2018 1:13:00 PM
Lovely passion BW, well done...
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