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The Rain Thundered

The sullen wind and the rain thundered,
and withdrawing my dripping cloak, I let my damp hair fall,
going to him, I made my smooth white shoulder bare,
my raven hair tangled, I whispered, "I love you" . . . 

I had come through the night to be with him,
he stroked my cheek and wound my hair in his fingers,
kissing my throat as I closed my eyes,
his lips burned with his love . . . 

My head, he clasped to his thundering chest,
and his tears came falling down,
we stayed together all the night long,
and still we have not stirred . . . 

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November 11, 2012


Poetry/Verse/The Rain Thundered
Copyright Protected, ID 12-1005-582-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written Under Pseudonym.



Submitted to the contest, End Of Mar 2018
Sponsor  Brian Strand

Second Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
March 24, 2018 at 10:57 PM
Beautiful imagery. Congrats on your top win, BW.
Sharma Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 9:56 AM
Yes so loving write congratulation on your win
Pigeon Tart Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 9:24 PM
So much passion! Lovely ink. Congratulations on your win! xomo
Gentry Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 9:00 AM
Descriptive and passionate. I pictured a scene from a movie while reading. Great imagery.
Gentry Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 3:26 PM
Congrats on your win!
Rodrigues Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 5:40 AM
Dark and lovely, Constance! A great piece of poetry!
Walsh Avatar
March 21, 2018 at 10:22 PM
Evocative. . . draws a Twilight scene to mind. Well Done You!
Smith Avatar
March 21, 2018 at 1:13 PM
Lovely passion BW, well done...
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