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The Rain Dance

Slow rhythmical shudder, Forest Rain and thunder, See the magic unfold, majesty to behold, Ruby green, spots of blue, Feathers of divine hue, A wild peacocks rain dance, A glimpse of wild romance! Nature inspired Alexandrine - Modified Poetry Contest Sponsored by Dear heart Written 22/03/2020

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/28/2020 5:01:00 PM

oh I guessed peacock on line five. This is a truly beautiful imagery of that divine bird. Congrats on the win.

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 3/28/2020 5:12:00 PM

Thanks Andrea. Grew up in a part of India where peacocks and Langoors were regular visitors to our house and garden.

Anisha Dutta

Date: 3/28/2020 7:33:00 AM

Congrats Krish to win. Do you stay in India ? You can soup mail me if you wish. Blessings.

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 3/28/2020 4:17:00 PM

Hi Anisha Thanks! I am based in UK! Indian origins. Like your poetry.

Constance La France

Date: 3/26/2020 10:10:00 AM

Krish, congratulations on your win in my contest, I love nature poems and this one is truly wonderful, so visual and dreamy _Constance

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 3/26/2020 11:47:00 AM

Thanks Constance! I sent a soup mail to you with my thanks for organising this wonderful contest that has generated some beautiful poetry!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/26/2020 2:38:00 AM

Exquisite imagery in your top winning poem Krish! Congratulations on your win! xxoo

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 3/26/2020 2:47:00 AM

Thanks Connie! Thanks for your kind words of appreciation!

Eve Roper

Date: 3/25/2020 10:52:00 PM

Krish, great poem and a big congratulations on your win in Dear Heart’s Alexamdrine contest-. Hugs Eve

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 3/26/2020 2:30:00 AM

Thank you Eve! Delighted to win! Hugs from me!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 3/23/2020 12:31:00 PM

This is so colorful, love the line 'feathers of divine hue' - reads like a winner to me!

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 3/23/2020 12:51:00 PM

Thanks Michelle! Appreciate your kind comments.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/22/2020 6:01:00 PM

Good luck in the contest. I like the beauty you have put into this missive.

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 3/22/2020 6:05:00 PM

Thanks Caren! One of the most beautiful events that I ever witnessed!