Krish Radhakrishna Poet Alexandrine

The Rain Dance

Slow rhythmical shudder,
Forest Rain and thunder,

See the magic unfold,
majesty to behold,

Ruby green, spots of blue,
Feathers of divine hue,

A wild peacocks rain dance,
A glimpse of wild romance!

Nature inspired
Alexandrine - Modified Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Dear heart
Written 22/03/2020

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Andrea Dietrich March 28, 2020 at 5:01 PM oh I guessed peacock on line five. This is a truly beautiful imagery of that divine bird. Congrats on the win. Krish Radhakrishna March 28, 2020 at 5:12 PM Thanks Andrea. Grew up in a part of India where peacocks and Langoors were regular visitors to our house and garden.

Anisha Dutta March 28, 2020 at 7:33 AM Congrats Krish to win. Do you stay in India ? You can soup mail me if you wish. Blessings. Krish Radhakrishna March 28, 2020 at 4:17 PM Hi Anisha Thanks! I am based in UK! Indian origins. Like your poetry.

Constance La France March 26, 2020 at 10:10 AM Krish, congratulations on your win in my contest, I love nature poems and this one is truly wonderful, so visual and dreamy _Constance Krish Radhakrishna March 26, 2020 at 11:47 AM Thanks Constance! I sent a soup mail to you with my thanks for organising this wonderful contest that has generated some beautiful poetry!

Connie Marcum Wong March 26, 2020 at 2:38 AM Exquisite imagery in your top winning poem Krish! Congratulations on your win! xxoo Krish Radhakrishna March 26, 2020 at 2:47 AM Thanks Connie! Thanks for your kind words of appreciation!

Eve Roper March 25, 2020 at 10:52 PM Krish, great poem and a big congratulations on your win in Dear Heart’s Alexamdrine contest-. Hugs Eve Krish Radhakrishna March 26, 2020 at 2:30 AM Thank you Eve! Delighted to win! Hugs from me!

Michelle Faulkner March 23, 2020 at 12:31 PM This is so colorful, love the line 'feathers of divine hue' - reads like a winner to me! Krish Radhakrishna March 23, 2020 at 12:51 PM Thanks Michelle! Appreciate your kind comments.

Caren Krutsinger March 22, 2020 at 6:01 PM Good luck in the contest. I like the beauty you have put into this missive. Krish Radhakrishna March 22, 2020 at 6:05 PM Thanks Caren! One of the most beautiful events that I ever witnessed!