The Rafters and the Watchers

Living is a carnival ride down a cataract.
Atop a raft made of wicker and bone.
Each gray boulder holding ripples of
heartache - joy- togetherness and alone.
Amidst the froth, like-minded people join in.
Navigating through concussion and confusion,

Along the shore are watchers-who never take a sip, 
never tasting sweet or sour on their lips.
They all head downstream toward the falls.

The water path has steepened. The rafters have thinned.
The falls are just beyond the final bend.

Shooting over the unknown edge, 
airborne and terrified but wholly alive.
Splashing down into the silvery violence.
Flecks of loved ones and strangers
tumbling in front of your eyes- 
   
Popping to the surface of Tranquility Pool.
Bloodied-broken-yet peacefully cool.
The watchers arrive along the fringe of the banks.
Heads down, garments pristine.
Losing at a game they never played.




 




 
                      2/4/19
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Rodrigues Avatar
February 6, 2019 at 8:40 PM
An interesting write! Congratulations on your win!
Bianco Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 6:22 PM
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed my poem
Devonshire Avatar
February 6, 2019 at 2:25 PM
Just stopping back with congratulations on your big win, Anthony! Chuckled reading your comment about the caffeine. Perhaps that's what's missing for me. Best wishes, Carolyn
One Avatar
February 6, 2019 at 1:10 PM
I agree with Carolyn on this poem, such deep story telling and you take the reader on your personal journey.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
Bianco Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 6:23 PM
Thank you for the words of encouragement. Anthony
Devonshire Avatar
February 4, 2019 at 8:48 AM
This is deep and thought-provoking, Anthony. In areas of life where we feel confident, we jump in. In more challenging pursuits, we sometimes hesitate and watch. Your poem can pertain to many aspects of life and I guess those who only watch feel "already dead." Awesome poem!
Bianco Avatar
February 4, 2019 at 9:43 AM
Hi C.D. I'm glad you enjoyed this poem- It came about during a caffeine rush-I still have to hone down the barbs and the bubbles. Anthony
Krutsinger Avatar
February 4, 2019 at 7:00 AM
I love the watchers! There are so many of them. "Along the shore there are the watchers never jumping in to see what it is all about they're heading in the same direction they are already dead". This truly reminds me of the TV watchers, who are living vicariously through the pretend lives of others. Guilty I am too. Hand raised. A thought provoking missive, my friend.
Bianco Avatar
February 4, 2019 at 9:40 AM
Thanks for popping by c.k. your responses to my poems are always full of life and much appreciated. Anthony
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