The Rabbit and the Fox

I had a little bunny fair
Who loved no one but me.
I hardly thought a fox would dare
To do such knavery.

I built my pet a darling hutch,
To save him from all harm,
Not knowing that a sly old fox
Would soon invade the farm.

We lived and laughed the whole day through
My darling hare and I.
Without a thought of that old fox
And danger coming nigh. 

I had no knowledge that a fox
Could slyly lift the latch.
And grab my bunny from his home,
For fox he was no match.

I know that fox is laughing still
My tears are falling fast.
I long to hold my pet again
Reliving days now past.

for PD’s contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 31, 2011 at 11:51 PM
congrats on your awesome contest entry luv*Skat
A   Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 11:49 PM
~ CONGRATULATIONS!! In my contest, and thank you for supporting my contest. I had a great time reading and judging every entry in my contest. Thanks for being among all my chosen winners. have a great one,.. Poet D.
Maverick Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 5:47 PM
Enjoyed the words Joyce, and congrats on your place in P D's contest!
Horne Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 12:02 PM
Awwww, many congrats on your win, Joyce : )
Phookan Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 10:52 AM
Congrats Joyce on your win in pd's contest interestingly done piece. love, gautami
Brown Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 7:11 AM
Congratulations on your placement in P.D's contest Joyce. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
May 30, 2011 at 8:37 PM
Congrats Joyce on your wonderful win in PD's cool contest with this awesome write about her mystique my friend.. enjoy with luv..
Mehta Avatar
May 30, 2011 at 6:03 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of p.d., Joyce
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December 29, 2010 at 4:35 AM
Though very sad the loss my dear poet, you made this beautiful poetry ring with pleasure to read ! TY for sharing this awesome write and may your New year....bring you a new, "Bunny Fair" !!!! much love, james
Adeite Avatar
December 28, 2010 at 8:29 AM
thanks for your comment, I will always remember your words... you are a great grandmom!
Mehta Avatar
December 27, 2010 at 1:57 PM
Nice to tell the story in the ballad style, Joyce
Flach Avatar
December 27, 2010 at 12:00 PM
Nice story and poem Joyce. Good luck in the contest. Joe
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December 27, 2010 at 11:53 AM
I love this ballad..It's cute and tells a great story. I do have a couple of ideas to make it flow better though. For a better sly. count.. the line ""while my tears fall so fast" try..while my tears are falling fast. the line "and relive days now past"..try..and relive the days now past...just a idea...great intro for the contest...good luck....Linda
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