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THE ROSE


T~hirty-two steps through the yellow-green grass led me to you.
H~aving to choose which one; my heart with no doubt chose you.
E~very rose bloomed quite differently, though nothing meretricious like you.

R~ed is known to be the favorite color to man; color blinded; my soul desired you.
O~f all the roses, my senses were captivated and comely to you.
S~ome men may pick more than one rose; but, I only want you.
E~ven mother nature so pulchritudinous can't compare to you.





Pace, G
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05-06-2012

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Date: 9/26/2015 6:09:00 PM
Roses are my favorite. I once wrote a poem named "A tear from a yellow rose." I kept it to myself never got the chance to share it but I love yours. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 4/29/2015 12:24:00 PM
It is phenomenal......enjoyable. Excellent work
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Date: 10/30/2014 4:57:00 PM
I so love poems with Roses in them, and this one sure had me smiling. Beautifully written, James :)
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Date: 10/22/2014 9:19:00 AM
this is sweet so very beautifully painted dear friend excellent pen
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Date: 6/13/2014 2:01:00 PM
This is really sweet.
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Date: 6/8/2014 3:19:00 PM
Love the wording you used. I must try this style some day :)
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Date: 3/25/2014 12:15:00 PM
Greetings Pace, just got introduced to your work and what a beautiful acrostic. Enjoy your Rose ! Tia.
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Date: 7/3/2013 8:14:00 PM
Wow, you can never go wrong when comparing love to Roses, Good Job bruh. I enjoyed this poem. Thank you again on commenting on mine.
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Date: 12/7/2012 1:40:00 PM
An oldie but a goodie. Just right for the top 100 all time Light & Love
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Date: 12/5/2012 1:09:00 PM
Having only one rose is terrific. I think that all we need in our life is one rose. I think its kind of hard to have more than one. Another great poem pace that I have enjoyed reading. I am glad that I visit you. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 11/20/2012 8:08:00 AM
its just woww!
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Date: 8/15/2012 5:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in P. D.'s "Rose Poems" contest Pace.
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Date: 8/13/2012 10:25:00 AM
congrats on your win G
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Date: 8/13/2012 4:22:00 AM
Congratulations Pace xx
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Date: 8/13/2012 2:10:00 AM
Pace, congrats on your win..David
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Date: 8/13/2012 1:29:00 AM
Pace, , I love nothing more than roses & unicorns... congratulations and thanks once again for full filling my rose passion... xoxoxox~ :-) PD
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Date: 8/12/2012 8:22:00 PM
Beautiful!
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Date: 7/30/2012 3:34:00 PM
I love roses...I love this poem...you are such an inspirtaion!
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Date: 8/7/2012 6:27:00 AM
Thank you dearly Doreen always!!!
Date: 7/11/2012 2:39:00 AM
Love roses,,,, good write ;}
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Date: 8/7/2012 6:26:00 AM
Thank you so much!!
Date: 6/19/2012 6:01:00 AM
IN LOVE WITH THIS ONE~!!!!!!!GREAT ONE,P!
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Date: 6/19/2012 2:17:00 PM
Thank you my dear poetess friend!!
Date: 6/10/2012 4:32:00 PM
I really enjoyed this piece...Beautiful sentiments of Love
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Date: 6/11/2012 11:05:00 AM
Thank you beautiful..always a pleasure having you!!
Date: 6/7/2012 6:44:00 AM
Breath taking!...Made my heart skip a beat<3
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Date: 6/11/2012 11:04:00 AM
Lol..Ahh the pleasure is all mine sweetheart!!
Date: 6/4/2012 1:32:00 PM
smiles to you too
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Date: 6/4/2012 1:33:00 PM
I thought you would like it!! Thanks for stopping by..smiles
Date: 6/4/2012 1:31:00 PM
awww that is a beautiful poem i like it, Bless you, from diane
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Date: 6/4/2012 1:34:00 PM
hugs!!
Date: 6/2/2012 7:57:00 PM
WOW "pulchritudinous" is one smart sounding word to describe physical beauty (thank you Webster)! Never heard of it in my life but it makes THE ROSE that much better. The focus you have on one individual should be 100% appreciated. FAV'd!! <3
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Date: 6/2/2012 9:00:00 PM
Lol..thank you!! Hugs!!
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