The Quiet Pull

A single pill rests on the counter--
quiet, small, almost polite.
I told myself it would stay that way.

But days grew thinner,
hours frayed at the edges
and the quiet promise began to hiss.

Friends laughed. I nodded.
My reflection wavered in the glass,
someone familiar yet gone.

The pull was slow - like water eroding stone,
soft at first, then urgent, unstoppable.

I chased the calm it offered,
unmindful of the shadows it left behind,
the nights pulsing with my heartbeat,
the mornings hollowed and quiet.

One day, I reached for air instead...
for the sharp taste of morning,
for voices that held me without judgment,
for a hand that said;
“You are not this. You are still you.”

Healing does not arrive in a flare.
It creeps softly, day by day
teaching the heart to see once more,
to taste the colors that were dimmed,
to carry the weight of the world
without letting it break the soul.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 12, 2025 at 5:03 PM
your poem tells a story of vulnerability and the need for one of 'those pills' (been there)...most of the time, it rested on my nightstand...your last verse is a tribute to the human spirit and its ability to move forward...outstanding
Velasco Avatar
September 13, 2025 at 12:05 AM
Thanks so much! That really means a lot—I’ve definitely been there, and I wanted to capture that feeling of struggling but still moving forward.
Leake Avatar
September 12, 2025 at 7:58 AM
Extremely well Written Piece Enjoyed this Kevin
Velasco Avatar
September 13, 2025 at 12:05 AM
Thanks.
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