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The Quiet Man

So there I was this early morn. standing on a pier with just myself and one other. As I was awaiting for the next unlucky crab to grab hold of my drop-line, I start to chat with the quiet man that has been standing next to me the entire time. I slowly nod my head and with a pleasant face, I say to him "LIFE IS GOOD" Circling over his head and soaring through the cloudless lite-blue sky, a flock of hungry seagulls. Below, the mild bay rippled as the tide began to return to sea. Again, I say to the quiet man "LIFE IS BEAUTIFUL" As the morning grew late and my basket filled with dinner, I decide to pack up my gear and head back to my vehicle- the quiet man followed. I take one last glance at the gorgeous surroundings I was leaving and again I say to the quiet man "IT'S BEEN WONDERFUL CHATTING WITH YOU MY FRIEND" I then, alone, open my car door, sit down, fasten my seatbelt and we both drive home together; smiling. The Quiet Man- my shadow

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Date: 12/26/2021 4:56:00 PM
Beautiful .... I LOVE this one.
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Date: 6/29/2021 3:50:00 PM
Hello Charlie Messina, oh you and the quiet man went home together? Is the feeling i sensed from this poem. enjoy your evening my friend.
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Charles Messina
Date: 7/2/2021 10:20:00 AM
Hello Darlene, thank you so much! You as well my dear friend.
Date: 6/28/2021 11:12:00 AM
Delightful poetry. No make that extraordinary! Loved it; so fitting for your personality as I envision you. A great example of surprise, Charlie.”
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Charles Messina
Date: 7/2/2021 10:20:00 AM
Reason, thank you so much for your kind words.
Date: 6/28/2021 4:42:00 AM
It is good that we can speak such encouragements out loud, while enjoying the day. Your quiet man indeed is smiling :)
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Charles Messina
Date: 7/2/2021 10:21:00 AM
Thank you, Kim :)
Date: 6/27/2021 6:05:00 PM
Very cleverly written
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Charles Messina
Date: 7/2/2021 10:21:00 AM
Thank you, Edmund
Date: 6/27/2021 4:27:00 PM
fabulous surprise ending Charlie, hope you are keeping well:-) hugs Jan xx
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Charles Messina
Date: 7/2/2021 10:22:00 AM
Thank you, Jan. All is well...hoping likewise to you and yours. Hugs// Charlie xx
Date: 6/26/2021 10:15:00 AM
So clever Charlie! Love the twist at the end of the ride!
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Charles Messina
Date: 7/2/2021 10:23:00 AM
Thank you so much, Sam!
Date: 6/24/2021 7:55:00 PM
Love this poem. It vaguely reminds me of the short story "The Secret Sharer". I loved the surprise ending.
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Charles Messina
Date: 7/2/2021 10:23:00 AM
Thank you so much, Laura. I never read the book, but I might now (lol)
Date: 6/23/2021 11:20:00 PM
Charles This is a wonderful write!! Good to see you back in form! Yes, a nice contest this should be.
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Charles Messina
Date: 7/2/2021 10:24:00 AM
Thank you, Krish. Not fully back but working my way back slowly (lol)
Date: 6/22/2021 7:47:00 PM
This totally resonates with me, Charlie. We men experience such moments. ~ gw
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Charles Messina
Date: 6/23/2021 8:12:00 AM
Absolutely! Thank you for stopping by, Gershon. ~ CM
Date: 6/20/2021 9:17:00 AM
Great example. A well written verse that captured my attention throughout. I see what you mean about the ending too :)
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Charles Messina
Date: 6/23/2021 8:12:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi :)
Date: 6/19/2021 12:50:00 PM
Firstly, am sending my regards to The Quiet Man :) Secondly interesting write charles messina, Thanks ^^
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Charles Messina
Date: 6/23/2021 8:14:00 AM
Thank you, Paris-Maree :) Regards, Charlie
Date: 6/19/2021 10:13:00 AM
Oh that was very cool, charles. I see what you mean by surprise ending. GREAT example for us.
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Charles Messina
Date: 6/23/2021 8:15:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea :)
Date: 6/19/2021 9:36:00 AM
The one friend on whom one can always depend on is your shadow. A fantastic write Charles, loved the surprise ending… Belle
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Charles Messina
Date: 6/23/2021 8:16:00 AM
So true! Thank you so much, Belle :) ~Charlie
Date: 6/19/2021 3:26:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... delightful and delighting from the start til the surprising ending. God bless you.
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Charles Messina
Date: 6/23/2021 8:17:00 AM
You're very welcome, Beata. Thank you also for your kind words... God Bless you...Charlie
Date: 6/18/2021 8:02:00 PM
The ending was certainly surprising! Sometimes, being all alone with our own thoughts, enjoying a beautiful pleasant day is a very welcome gift! I hope you are having another beautiful day!
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Charles Messina
Date: 6/23/2021 8:19:00 AM
Hi BJ, Indeed it is! Thank you so much for your kind words. Have a wonderful day :) ~Charlie
Date: 6/18/2021 12:35:00 PM
Much enjoyed Charlie. Cleverly done.
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Charles Messina
Date: 6/23/2021 8:20:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay. :)
Date: 6/18/2021 9:58:00 AM
A wonderful story/write. I love it. The ending was great. "My shadow" that is always with us. Have a wonderful/blessed day/weekend..................
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Charles Messina
Date: 6/23/2021 8:21:00 AM
Hi Paula, thank you so much for your kind words. Have a marvelous day and rest of the week........Charlie
Date: 6/18/2021 6:37:00 AM
Wow! Charles, That a surprise ending for sure. It's a great example for you contest. Have a wonderful day and weekend;-) Alexis
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Charles Messina
Date: 6/18/2021 6:39:00 AM
Hi Alexis, thank you for your inspiring words. Have a great day. Sending love, Charlie
Date: 6/18/2021 6:24:00 AM
A surprising end indeed, Charles, brilliant:)
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Charles Messina
Date: 6/18/2021 6:37:00 AM
Thank you very much, Jo. Nice to see you... Sending love, Charlie
Date: 6/18/2021 5:47:00 AM
This is a Amazing example for your contest! Excellent... Not to be compared with. I love it. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Charles Messina
Date: 6/18/2021 6:36:00 AM
Thank you so much, Gina. Always nice to see your lovely comments. God bless you... Sending love, Charlie
Date: 6/18/2021 5:21:00 AM
It's a deep, meaningful poem, Charles. I was curious till the last line. The ending truly surprised me. Warm wishes ~ Mala
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Charles Messina
Date: 6/18/2021 6:40:00 AM
Hi Mala, thank you for reading and for your warm wishes. Warmest wishes to you as well. Sending love, Charlie
Date: 6/18/2021 4:39:00 AM
Loved your story Charlie, hope you are keeping well. Tom
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Charles Messina
Date: 6/18/2021 6:42:00 AM
Hello Tom, been awhile. Thanks for stopping by and for the kind words. All is well...I hope you are doing well too my dear friend. Good vibes!

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