The Quiet Man

So there I was this early morn. standing on a pier with just myself and one other.
As I was awaiting for the next unlucky crab to grab hold of my drop-line, I start to chat with the quiet man that has been standing next to me the entire time.
I slowly nod my head and with a pleasant face, I say to him "LIFE IS GOOD"
Circling over his head and soaring through the cloudless lite-blue sky, a flock of hungry seagulls.
Below, the mild bay rippled as the tide began to return to sea. 
Again, I say to the quiet man "LIFE IS BEAUTIFUL"  
As the morning grew late and my basket filled with dinner, I decide to pack up my gear and head back to my vehicle- the quiet man followed. 
I take one last glance at the gorgeous surroundings I was leaving and again I say to the quiet man "IT'S BEEN WONDERFUL CHATTING WITH YOU MY FRIEND"  I then, alone, open my car door, sit down, fasten my seatbelt and we both drive home together; smiling.
  
The Quiet Man- my shadow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Labyrinth Avatar
December 26, 2021 at 4:56 PM
Beautiful .... I LOVE this one.
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 3:50 PM
Hello Charlie Messina, oh you and the quiet man went home together? Is the feeling i sensed from this poem. enjoy your evening my friend.
Messina Avatar
July 2, 2021 at 10:20 AM
Hello Darlene, thank you so much! You as well my dear friend.
Poteet Avatar
June 28, 2021 at 11:12 AM
Delightful poetry. No make that extraordinary! Loved it; so fitting for your personality as I envision you. A great example of surprise, Charlie.”
Messina Avatar
July 2, 2021 at 10:20 AM
Reason, thank you so much for your kind words.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 28, 2021 at 4:42 AM
It is good that we can speak such encouragements out loud, while enjoying the day. Your quiet man indeed is smiling :)
Messina Avatar
July 2, 2021 at 10:21 AM
Thank you, Kim :)
Strempfl Avatar
June 27, 2021 at 6:05 PM
Very cleverly written
Messina Avatar
July 2, 2021 at 10:21 AM
Thank you, Edmund
Allison Avatar
June 27, 2021 at 4:27 PM
fabulous surprise ending Charlie, hope you are keeping well:-) hugs Jan xx
Messina Avatar
July 2, 2021 at 10:22 AM
Thank you, Jan. All is well...hoping likewise to you and yours. Hugs// Charlie xx
Kauffman Avatar
June 26, 2021 at 10:15 AM
So clever Charlie! Love the twist at the end of the ride!
Messina Avatar
July 2, 2021 at 10:23 AM
Thank you so much, Sam!
Spears Avatar
June 24, 2021 at 7:55 PM
Love this poem. It vaguely reminds me of the short story "The Secret Sharer". I loved the surprise ending.
Messina Avatar
July 2, 2021 at 10:23 AM
Thank you so much, Laura. I never read the book, but I might now (lol)
Radhakrishna Avatar
June 23, 2021 at 11:20 PM
Charles This is a wonderful write!! Good to see you back in form! Yes, a nice contest this should be.
Messina Avatar
July 2, 2021 at 10:24 AM
Thank you, Krish. Not fully back but working my way back slowly (lol)
Wolf Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 7:47 PM
This totally resonates with me, Charlie. We men experience such moments. ~ gw
Messina Avatar
June 23, 2021 at 8:12 AM
Absolutely! Thank you for stopping by, Gershon. ~ CM
Sands Avatar
June 20, 2021 at 9:17 AM
Great example. A well written verse that captured my attention throughout. I see what you mean about the ending too :)
Messina Avatar
June 23, 2021 at 8:12 AM
Thank you, Heidi :)
Boreham Avatar
June 19, 2021 at 12:50 PM
Firstly, am sending my regards to The Quiet Man :) Secondly interesting write charles messina, Thanks ^^
Messina Avatar
June 23, 2021 at 8:14 AM
Thank you, Paris-Maree :) Regards, Charlie
Dietrich Avatar
June 19, 2021 at 10:13 AM
Oh that was very cool, charles. I see what you mean by surprise ending. GREAT example for us.
Messina Avatar
June 23, 2021 at 8:15 AM
Thank you, Andrea :)
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June 19, 2021 at 9:36 AM
The one friend on whom one can always depend on is your shadow. A fantastic write Charles, loved the surprise ending… Belle
Messina Avatar
June 23, 2021 at 8:16 AM
So true! Thank you so much, Belle :) ~Charlie
Agustin Avatar
June 19, 2021 at 3:26 AM
Thanks for sharing this... delightful and delighting from the start til the surprising ending. God bless you.
Messina Avatar
June 23, 2021 at 8:17 AM
You're very welcome, Beata. Thank you also for your kind words... God Bless you...Charlie
Legros Kelley Avatar
June 18, 2021 at 8:02 PM
The ending was certainly surprising! Sometimes, being all alone with our own thoughts, enjoying a beautiful pleasant day is a very welcome gift! I hope you are having another beautiful day!
Messina Avatar
June 23, 2021 at 8:19 AM
Hi BJ, Indeed it is! Thank you so much for your kind words. Have a wonderful day :) ~Charlie
Pandit Avatar
June 18, 2021 at 12:35 PM
Much enjoyed Charlie. Cleverly done.
Messina Avatar
June 23, 2021 at 8:20 AM
Thank you, Vijay. :)
Goldsmith Avatar
June 18, 2021 at 9:58 AM
A wonderful story/write. I love it. The ending was great. "My shadow" that is always with us. Have a wonderful/blessed day/weekend..................
Messina Avatar
June 23, 2021 at 8:21 AM
Hi Paula, thank you so much for your kind words. Have a marvelous day and rest of the week........Charlie
Y. Avatar
June 18, 2021 at 6:37 AM
Wow! Charles, That a surprise ending for sure. It's a great example for you contest. Have a wonderful day and weekend;-) Alexis
Messina Avatar
June 18, 2021 at 6:39 AM
Hi Alexis, thank you for your inspiring words. Have a great day. Sending love, Charlie
Daniel Avatar
June 18, 2021 at 6:24 AM
A surprising end indeed, Charles, brilliant:)
Messina Avatar
June 18, 2021 at 6:37 AM
Thank you very much, Jo. Nice to see you... Sending love, Charlie
Mcintosh Avatar
June 18, 2021 at 5:47 AM
This is a Amazing example for your contest! Excellent... Not to be compared with. I love it. God bless you always, Love, Gina
Messina Avatar
June 18, 2021 at 6:36 AM
Thank you so much, Gina. Always nice to see your lovely comments. God bless you... Sending love, Charlie
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June 18, 2021 at 5:21 AM
It's a deep, meaningful poem, Charles. I was curious till the last line. The ending truly surprised me. Warm wishes ~ Mala
Messina Avatar
June 18, 2021 at 6:40 AM
Hi Mala, thank you for reading and for your warm wishes. Warmest wishes to you as well. Sending love, Charlie
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June 18, 2021 at 4:39 AM
Loved your story Charlie, hope you are keeping well. Tom
Messina Avatar
June 18, 2021 at 6:42 AM
Hello Tom, been awhile. Thanks for stopping by and for the kind words. All is well...I hope you are doing well too my dear friend. Good vibes!
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