The Quick Use of a Fly Flap

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I made some banana nut bread this morning and it was in the oven..I looked over at the bowls that needed to be loaded into the dishwasher and there was a housefly on the mixing bowl savoring the batter..Of course, he was history..Sara

The fly On a bowl's rim Fresh banana nut bread Aroma floats as a fly dies Sweet Death

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Jack Horne

Date: 7/29/2015 4:58:00 PM

lol, poor fly but had a chuckle at this one

Emile Pinet

Date: 6/22/2015 5:51:00 PM

This poetic trip though the kitchen is, thought provoking, descriptive, and creative all rolled up into a beautiful poem. Emile.

Constance La France

Date: 6/22/2015 5:24:00 PM

Sara, delightful and delicious well except for the fly, and thanks for visiting my poem, three grey cats

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/22/2015 4:09:00 PM

ahhh, a very sweet death to him. This was quite clever, Sara.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/22/2015 1:34:00 PM

i'd still finish this tasty bread depsite a fly, sara... looks so goood!... wonderful piece! huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/22/2015 1:08:00 PM

.... Belly is full and one sweet death :))) - Good one, Sara .... well done ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)