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What kind of people are we? Veterans sleeping and begging on the street Children without enough food to eat Elders unable to pay for the heat What kind of people are we? We build stadiums where heroes play games Casting big shadows to cover forgotten names But nothing is done to address the anger and shame What kind of people are we? We just disregard all the damage we cause We worship the grim reaper, denying his flaws We’re starring in Mouseland, grasping at straws What kind of people are we? Someday we will answer, or maybe our children will For turning away from our friends and relations in need But rest assured an answer will be demanded What kind of people are we?

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Date: 3/30/2021 2:27:00 PM
You posted this poem in 2017 and we still have no answer in 2021. Thank you for writing things that need to be said.
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Kevin Cummings
Date: 11/2/2021 6:28:00 AM
Thank you Ann. The voices in our hearts need to appear on pages so other voices can join them.
Date: 3/19/2021 12:34:00 PM
Definitely 'what kind of people are we' I have never been a great fan of people, I much prefer animals. I enjoyed your poem.
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Kevin Cummings
Date: 11/2/2021 6:26:00 AM
Animals are much more honest
Date: 3/19/2021 10:52:00 AM
It's all only about the bottom line... Well done!
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Kevin Cummings
Date: 11/2/2021 6:29:00 AM
So true, only we can change it.
Date: 3/18/2021 8:26:00 PM
This is a question in my mind too. I like how you write with such compassion. That makes you passion come through. Wonderful poem!
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Kevin Cummings
Date: 11/2/2021 6:29:00 AM
Very kind of you Jennifer, I do feel the verse as it comes
Date: 3/17/2021 12:00:00 PM
Thank you for this great poem! I think our words have joined hands :)
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Date: 3/17/2021 11:12:00 AM
I have hope that our true selves will win out.
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Date: 3/17/2021 10:51:00 AM
Dear Kevin, I love your Kyrielle. You have posed a moral question and given the reader reasons to make a logic, moral conclusion. The rhyme and meter is well-done. By the third stanza you've added a few more syllables than you need, which is a common tendency, but otherwise it is such a good poem! Thought-provoking.
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Kevin Cummings
Date: 10/2/2022 8:32:00 AM
Thank you for the input, I agree that the third stanza got wordy and have finally addressed it. Keep sharing - it is appreciated
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Kevin Cummings
Date: 11/2/2021 6:31:00 AM
Thank you Carol
Date: 3/24/2017 6:41:00 PM
Wonderful work with great thought given to the subject mater as it is gently unfolded for the readers delight. Your word choice is good and the message sent is strong and emotional. Emile.
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Kevin Cummings
Date: 2/8/2018 10:31:00 AM
Thank you Emile, we are blessed to be able to share
Date: 3/22/2017 8:11:00 PM
Hey Kevin, I'm new to the website so I'm not sure if you'll see this, but I am a high school student having to analyse a poem for English class. I really love this one that you have written and I was wondering, if you were up for it, if you could answer a few questions that I have. They won't be particularly personal but I need to know some background info on the author of the poem that I choose. Let me know if you're up to answering a few questions :) thanks
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Andrea Rizos
Date: 3/26/2017 4:50:00 AM
I think email should be fine, let me know your details asap :)
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Kevin Cummings
Date: 3/23/2017 1:16:00 PM
Thank you for reading and contacting me. I would be happy to share with you. Would you prefer to send me an email with the questions, or other method. netgraffiti at cs.com
Date: 3/22/2017 12:28:00 PM
Perhaps our own internal thirsts and hungers overwhelm us?
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Kevin Cummings
Date: 2/8/2018 10:29:00 AM
The demons and angels are always at work. Thank you for sharing

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