The Quest

Clouds collect again The sunflowers looking for A little sunlight September,24, 2017

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/29/2017 7:09:00 AM

I can just visualize their search with waving golden heads. Love it!

Probir Gupta
Date: 9/29/2017 10:58:00 PM

Exactly ... Thank you ...

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/23/2017 9:03:00 PM

Bent over perhaps, "oh shucks" We had a perfect day over here! Hope you get yours, Probir! Nice!

Probir Gupta
Date: 9/23/2017 10:45:00 PM

Days are always perfect for people who themselves are perfect ... Here it is all clouds ... and the sunflowers are morose ... thank you for visiting and liking ...

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/23/2017 8:33:00 PM

I love sunflowers Probir, and I love your sunflower haiku. I can just see the sunflower faces raised, turning to follow the sun's path through the sky. An awesome write. I hope all is well with you my friend :)

Probir Gupta
Date: 9/23/2017 10:46:00 PM

Thank you, Susan ...

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/23/2017 8:29:00 PM

Lovely observation..well written Probir!

Probir Gupta
Date: 9/23/2017 10:47:00 PM

Thank you, Vijay ...

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/23/2017 8:10:00 PM

Nice Haiku Probir. I passed a lot of big sunflowers the other day :)

Probir Gupta
Date: 9/23/2017 8:18:00 PM

Thank you ...