The Quest

Danger lurking everywhere, behind each boulder, gulch and hill;
the likelihood of trouble poised in tense,  crouching forms,
Indian or animal, murderer or thief, marauders of the badlands,
joined with weather threats: sand, hail, fire and thunderstorm.

Two partners in search of better fortunes, leaving all behind,
wives, children, homes, friends and families set aside;
stretching out before them, farther than the eye could see,
the badlands to be conquered without benefit of guide.

Will they make the desperate crossing, reach their quest across the way
or will some later traveler find displayed their bleaching bones?
Thousands made the journey, many died upon the road,
and the adventures that they lived remain unknown.

The badlands conquered many before man conquered them,
a country built of dreams, some lost, some realized;
upon the backs of men like these, we stand up, proud and strong--
their utmost dream complete and actualized.

Copyright, September 28, 2014
Faye Lanham Gibson

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 10/23/2014 1:57:00 PM
Dear Faye, we took a similar approach, but I like your poem better. You left a lot up to the imagination and I always enjoy poems of that nature. Those "bleached bones" are probably below sand dunes on the prairies now, but there have to be many of them, just as you describe. I especially liked the profound line: "The badlands conquered many before man conquered them." Excellent observation and very true. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/22/2014 10:22:00 PM
ah Faye an excellent pen love it congrats on win hugs
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Date: 10/22/2014 11:47:00 AM
Interesting write, Faye, congrats on the win
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Date: 10/22/2014 6:13:00 AM
beautifully penned Faye many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 10/21/2014 11:19:00 PM
I love your poem Faye, especially how you ended it. This is so true. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 9/30/2014 7:06:00 AM
Your Quest is the Best, Faye, Good Luck with the contest
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Faye Gibson
Date: 9/30/2014 8:00:00 AM
Thanks, Jerry. On our way to the closing for a condo we just bought in Fort Pierce, FL. Florida will be our year round home soon!!! No more COLD.
Date: 9/28/2014 5:08:00 PM
Awesome write Faye, I enjoyed this a lot...Sharon G. Hugs :)
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Sharon Gulley
Date: 10/23/2014 11:10:00 PM
I also wanted to say Congrats on the great win. That is what I was trying to say anyways, fingers not working well tonight , forgive. Sharon G. :)
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Sharon Gulley
Date: 10/23/2014 11:07:00 PM
Also wantd Congrats on the great win. I live in Florida as well. I Jacksonville, Florida. Welcome to the home of the sun :)...Sharon G.
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