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a puzzle deceits veiled barred inside each vibrant mortal soul one would linger the bearer could not warn Written: August 13, 2022 Say It In Nine Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joseph May Checked By: HMS.COM

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/23/2022 10:16:00 AM

William, congratulations on your win! I love the contrasts of "vibrant" with "mortal," "linger" and "warn," and veiled deceits. So much said in so few words. Congrats and high fives! Blessings.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/21/2022 9:16:00 PM

An intriguing piece I like very much. Congratulations on your win my friend. Blessings xxoo

Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/20/2022 5:05:00 AM

Beautiful mystic work. Congratulations!

Joseph May

Date: 8/19/2022 11:46:00 AM

Very nicely penned Sotto, Congrats on your win

Bill Baker

Date: 8/17/2022 4:48:00 PM

Wisdom in a short form poem. Very impressive, Lasaad. Great entry, good luck my friend. Bill

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/17/2022 7:44:00 AM

Deceits veiled within each soul. It is true. We have at least one something to repent. I enjoyed reading your contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Sara

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/16/2022 6:10:00 AM

Your ninette is excellent--thoughtful. One who wants to share secrets in confidence would do well to whisper them only to a statue! Janice