Sotto Poet Poet Ninette

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The Puzzle

a
puzzle
deceits veiled
barred inside each
vibrant mortal soul
one would linger
the bearer
could not
warn

Written: August 13, 2022

Say It In Nine Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Joseph May

Checked By: HMS.COM

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Sam Kauffman August 23, 2022 at 10:16 AM William, congratulations on your win! I love the contrasts of "vibrant" with "mortal," "linger" and "warn," and veiled deceits. So much said in so few words. Congrats and high fives! Blessings.

Connie Marcum Wong August 21, 2022 at 9:16 PM An intriguing piece I like very much. Congratulations on your win my friend. Blessings xxoo

Christuraj Alex August 20, 2022 at 5:05 AM Beautiful mystic work. Congratulations!

Joseph May August 19, 2022 at 11:46 AM Very nicely penned Sotto, Congrats on your win

Bill Baker August 17, 2022 at 4:48 PM Wisdom in a short form poem. Very impressive, Lasaad. Great entry, good luck my friend. Bill

Sara Kendrick August 17, 2022 at 7:44 AM Deceits veiled within each soul. It is true. We have at least one something to repent. I enjoyed reading your contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Sara

Janice Canerdy August 16, 2022 at 6:10 AM Your ninette is excellent--thoughtful. One who wants to share secrets in confidence would do well to whisper them only to a statue! Janice

Valsa George August 15, 2022 at 12:14 AM Profound and pithy, conveying beyond the limit of words ! A great entry for the contest ! All the best dear Lasaad !

Mystic Rose Rose August 14, 2022 at 3:41 PM such a creative piece of poetry Sotto, winning wishes :)

Jennifer Proxenos August 14, 2022 at 12:09 PM I would say Lasaad that this entry is a sure winner great entry and best of luck in the contest my friend . hugs and blessings Jennifer

Victor Buhagiar August 14, 2022 at 1:57 AM This is an enigman.