The Puppy

An only child I grew up free
of sibling squabbles, which was fine.
No nieces, nephews, there for me,
I was a lone leaf on the vine,
the end of this old family line.
I never felt my life flawed.
I found a puppy in decline.
A puppy was my gift from God.
 
I found the fellow by a tree,
abandoned, nestled by a pine.
We were then poor, but he was free!
I pledged to feed him food of mine.
The way we bonded seemed divine.
My mom and grandma were both awed.
The puppy never once did whine.
A puppy was my gift from God.
 
I taught the puppy where to pee.
He learned to sit with just a sign.
Where ever I was, there was he.
I nursed him 'til his eyes did shine
with life,  no more was he supine.
He slept with me;  he never gnawed.
He filled lonesome days with sunshine.
A puppy was my gift from God.
 
That puppy made my life benign.
Oh, Prince of Peace, men must applaud
the wonder of the grand design.
A puppy is a gift from God.

June 15, 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 7/15/2015 11:10:00 AM
A beautiful poem of your pet Congrats on your win!
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Date: 7/15/2015 1:47:00 AM
Hi Lawrence, Congrats on your win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 7/14/2015 11:21:00 PM
Lawrence, congratulations on your awesome beloved pet winning poem. **SKAT**
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Date: 7/14/2015 1:35:00 PM
puppy love - oh what a lovely write congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Lawrence Eberhart
Date: 7/14/2015 8:16:00 PM
Thank you very much. Not been here much. Will catch up this week.
Date: 7/14/2015 7:43:00 AM
This is precious, so memorable. Thank you for a heartwarming poem
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Lawrence Eberhart
Date: 7/14/2015 8:16:00 PM
Thanks. So pleased it pleased.
Date: 7/14/2015 3:02:00 AM
A well deserved first place, Lawrence, simply lovely. Congratulations. Regards, Viv
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Lawrence Eberhart
Date: 7/14/2015 8:18:00 PM
Thank youA pleasant surprise.
Date: 7/14/2015 1:41:00 AM
loved this story, congrats on your first place win in my contest. You had a lot of competition but yours wowed me the most
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Lawrence Eberhart
Date: 7/14/2015 8:20:00 PM
Thank you Francine, I am honored.
Date: 6/17/2015 6:31:00 PM
You know what? I see this one as a BIG contender in the contest!! VERY well crafted. I really like it! and thanks for your "terse" poem(comment) on my own terse poem. I loved it.
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Lawrence Eberhart
Date: 7/14/2015 8:20:00 PM
Many thann kewws!
Date: 6/15/2015 9:11:00 PM
Puppy love is true unconditional love. Great Write! Best Regards!
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Lawrence Eberhart
Date: 7/14/2015 8:19:00 PM
Their role in the ascent of man is huge.
Date: 6/15/2015 6:32:00 PM
Written like a true dog lover...I truly enjoyed your write..thank you for sharing...rgds, 7habang
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Lawrence Eberhart
Date: 6/15/2015 7:15:00 PM
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