'the Puppet Master' - Repost

This cup is for you
for bluffing yourself 
and for thinking you know me,
here’s to you for pretending to care 
and make me believe that you do,
here’s to you for 
being the puppet-master
in the puppet show,
which is my life
I would like the strings back
before they are beyond repair
I would like to be the master 
of my own destiny
for a change
I would like to control where
my journey ends 
and what happens 
on the way there
but with you as the puppet-master
it’s virtually impossible
so this is me
begging you
for the strings
that contain
every facet of my life…
please be so kind 
as to leave it at the door 
on your way out…

31/05/2011... 12:30

*my first poem on the soup*


Contest: First poem on the Soup
5th place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 6/3/2011 1:16:00 PM
Interesting piece wilma, there are a lot of places this poem could take your thoughts.. really enjoyed the read!
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Date: 6/2/2011 12:47:00 AM
grats on your awesome contest entry Luv*Skat
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Date: 6/1/2011 12:21:00 PM
Congratulations Wilma on your win in pd's contest with this awesome first poem on soup.love, gautami
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Date: 6/1/2011 8:06:00 AM
Many congrats, Wilma : )
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Date: 6/1/2011 7:24:00 AM
Hey, Wilma, Congrats on your win. Great to see your name in the winners circle, but it's no surprise. Nice going, my friend. luv Ralph
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Date: 6/1/2011 7:05:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of p.d. , Wilma
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Date: 6/1/2011 6:03:00 AM
congrats on this win.. cory
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Date: 6/1/2011 5:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in P.D.'s contest Wilma. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/1/2011 12:18:00 AM
wilma!~ CONGRATULATIONS!! In my contest, and thank you for supporting my contest. I had a great time reading and judging every entry in my contest. Thanks for being among all my chosen winners. have a great one,.. Poet D
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Date: 5/31/2011 10:20:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this empowering piece missy, knew i would be back :) mwahugs
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Date: 5/31/2011 9:31:00 PM
congrats Wilma on your excellent win tonight in this contest with this amazing entry my friend.. enjoy sweet success once again luv..
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Date: 5/31/2011 8:37:00 PM
I'm glad to now say I have seen your first poem posted.A well deserved win, my friend. I loved the ending on this one, "leave it at the door on your way out...."
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Date: 5/31/2011 2:16:00 PM
Take me back to the start! I remember this emotive piece, Wilma! pd's contest sure is very timely, huh first birthday girl-- wonderful way for you to spotlight your first post here-- enjoyed this one just as much as the first time I read it _-I know I commented there right?? haha oops if I hadn't! forgetful me heehee --mwahuggo
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Date: 5/31/2011 1:33:00 PM
Good riddance, I'd say. Love your symbolism. Love, daver
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Date: 5/31/2011 8:00:00 AM
soupmail
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Date: 5/31/2011 8:01:00 AM
love the theme by the way
Date: 5/31/2011 7:35:00 AM
Outstanding, Wlma. Very strong message! Here's your hat, what's your hurry? Don't call me, I'll call you! Excellent write. Good luck, my friend. luv Ralph
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Date: 5/31/2011 4:32:00 AM
i stirring write, wilma... hiw nice to go back to one;s first entry! winning;s best! :)huggs, nette
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Date: 5/31/2011 3:54:00 AM
Sometimes that is what happens in relationships..Sara
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