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The Puppet

Slowly the curtains parted a head peeps out Dressed as a small child so lifelike Can see the strings working the arms In a disjointed fashion But the eyes..... the eyes looked dead The puppet danced. Drummed...played keyboard So lifelike it was scary The show had been running about half hour When the strings slumped The puppet slid effortlessly to the floor Legs askew and arms folded The puppeteer, made some comment Slid the curtains closed something made me look To my horror, could see the man Slapping the puppet shouting loudly Then the puppets eyes opened He looked straight at me Could see the pain in its eyes The pleading for help. When the police arrested the puppeteer They found this dwarf figure of a man He was the puppet. Locked away were half a dozen more Drugged into a deep sleep. So next time you watch a puppet show The puppets may look lifelike Take a closer look, cos it just might be They are.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/14/2017 7:03:00 PM
I loved reading this again, sometimes a second time you can appreciate a poem even more!
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Date: 12/27/2014 1:25:00 PM
Oh my goodness Seren, this is so creative. I do think however it may give me nightmares for a while. I guess that's a compliment. A Fav!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/27/2014 6:06:00 PM
Sorry Maurice, would hate for me to be the cause of your nightmares...thank you... Seren
Date: 12/26/2014 4:48:00 PM
Seren, This is a very creative write indeed. And the imagery you've weaved into the verses is quite impeccable. For me, it has some similar shades to the old "Devil Doll" motif developed and used in a British screenplay and movie by that name from 1964 with Bryant Halliday. Very well-done and quite interesting indeed!! This is a definite "7" and a FAV for me. Best Holiday Wishes, Gary
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/26/2014 4:55:00 PM
Wow Gary I am speechless, thank you so much for your comment and fav.....Seren
Date: 12/26/2014 4:40:00 PM
Very eerie Seren...I think I will pass on the next puppet show....hugs Tim
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/26/2014 4:56:00 PM
Cowardy custard. Tim, just look for the wink .....Seren
Date: 12/26/2014 4:27:00 PM
oh so creative i loved the imagery Seren - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/26/2014 4:57:00 PM
Thanks Jan, tried to be a little different....Seren
Date: 12/26/2014 4:18:00 PM
Brilliant, what a creative write!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/1/2015 10:53:00 AM
Its ok the only important list to get on is Santa's and not the good one!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/1/2015 4:12:00 AM
lol my friend not brilliant enough, didn't make the list....Seren

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