The Puppet

Slowly the curtains parted a head peeps out
Dressed as a small child so lifelike

Can see the strings working the arms
In a disjointed fashion
But the eyes.....
the eyes looked dead

The puppet danced. 
Drummed...played keyboard
So lifelike it was scary

The show had been running about half hour
When the strings slumped
The puppet slid effortlessly to the floor
Legs askew and arms folded

The puppeteer, made some comment
Slid the curtains closed something made me look 
To my horror, could see the man
Slapping the puppet shouting loudly

Then the puppets eyes opened
He looked straight at me 
Could see the pain in its eyes
The pleading for help.

When the police arrested the puppeteer
They found this dwarf figure of a man
He was the puppet.
Locked away were half a dozen more
Drugged into a deep sleep.

So next time you watch a puppet show
The puppets may look lifelike
Take a closer look, cos it just might be
They are.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/14/2017 7:03:00 PM
I loved reading this again, sometimes a second time you can appreciate a poem even more!
Login to Reply
Date: 12/27/2014 1:25:00 PM
Oh my goodness Seren, this is so creative. I do think however it may give me nightmares for a while. I guess that's a compliment. A Fav!
Login to Reply
Roberts Avatar
Seren Roberts
Date: 12/27/2014 6:06:00 PM
Sorry Maurice, would hate for me to be the cause of your nightmares...thank you... Seren
Date: 12/26/2014 4:48:00 PM
Seren, This is a very creative write indeed. And the imagery you've weaved into the verses is quite impeccable. For me, it has some similar shades to the old "Devil Doll" motif developed and used in a British screenplay and movie by that name from 1964 with Bryant Halliday. Very well-done and quite interesting indeed!! This is a definite "7" and a FAV for me. Best Holiday Wishes, Gary
Login to Reply
Roberts Avatar
Seren Roberts
Date: 12/26/2014 4:55:00 PM
Wow Gary I am speechless, thank you so much for your comment and fav.....Seren
Date: 12/26/2014 4:40:00 PM
Very eerie Seren...I think I will pass on the next puppet show....hugs Tim
Login to Reply
Roberts Avatar
Seren Roberts
Date: 12/26/2014 4:56:00 PM
Cowardy custard. Tim, just look for the wink .....Seren
Date: 12/26/2014 4:27:00 PM
oh so creative i loved the imagery Seren - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx
Login to Reply
Roberts Avatar
Seren Roberts
Date: 12/26/2014 4:57:00 PM
Thanks Jan, tried to be a little different....Seren
Date: 12/26/2014 4:18:00 PM
Brilliant, what a creative write!
Login to Reply
Vaso Avatar
Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/1/2015 10:53:00 AM
Its ok the only important list to get on is Santa's and not the good one!
Roberts Avatar
Seren Roberts
Date: 1/1/2015 4:12:00 AM
lol my friend not brilliant enough, didn't make the list....Seren
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter