The Proverbial Hot Seat

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As newlyweds we moved to Houston, where the traffic was insane.
I was finishing college there, and it made the commute a royal pain.
My husband told me emphatically to never park out in the road,
But one week he was out of town, and I figured he wouldn’t know.

I went next door to visit a friend, then suddenly we heard a loud bang.
It was gunfire, and shots that had ominously rang.
We looked out the window and it was utter chaos.
My van was being used as a shield, and the cops were in a face-off.

My heart was pounding as I thought of my poor van in the street,
Knowing when my husband found out, I would be in the proverbial hot seat.
Luck was on my side, and my van escaped without a scratch,
But it made the nightly news about the perilous shooting match.

I decided since there was no damage, I would just keep quiet.
About six months later I told my husband and broke my duplicitous silence.
He said, “I told you so,” and lectured me on where to park.
I vowed not to park there again, silently wishing I had left him in the dark.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 4/8/2016 2:16:00 PM
this is so cute, this is so sweet....when I first read it, I didn't expect this treat....you write with a style so Beautifully unique....you offer inspiration that all us writers seek....very well done Brenda....;)
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Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 4/8/2016 2:19:00 PM
Thank you Eric. Loved your rhyming reply! :)
Date: 4/6/2016 8:40:00 PM
I love mini bio poem stories like this, it was quite humorous!:)
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Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 4/6/2016 8:52:00 PM
Glad you liked it Cheryl!
Date: 4/6/2016 6:41:00 PM
Brenda, a smooth read, but a bit scary. Hope you are living in a quieter area. ~ Sonia
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Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 4/6/2016 6:59:00 PM
Yes, that is too much crime for me. I now live in a peaceful small city in south Georgia.
Date: 4/6/2016 2:50:00 PM
Great story Brenda. Enjoyed reading your humor today. Peace young lady:)
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Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 4/6/2016 2:54:00 PM
Thanks Daniel. Have a good day.
Date: 4/6/2016 1:53:00 PM
Funny story Benda...happy nothing happened to the van or you.
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Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 4/6/2016 2:07:00 PM
Thanks Tim, yes I was lucky.
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