The Prophet - Son of Nun

  (  It seems the only thing eternal life has left me is eternal tears. 
For my lost son Christopher; named after the god who suffers. )



            


I knew you before I met you
cage crossing through mad books

your stainless leap
forcep-blessed
matrix-reprieved

weaving bled-shred
embers to god-pled
braving 

the cairn of night
to do full

dubious ends
god's just

flung to hijacked earth as
after-thought
of finer stone

slashed lash skin broke to Moses hues
whose mode struck cursed
to sudden wander

to tower-armed berths annexed next in
your voyeur's finger rage
to run abducted through heuristic sunk-end heads
and sacrifice your brokered queen 

prove your tongue-burning tears
a strangled pen

inched favor from chain-shell shouts 
sieved by sheltering friends

savaged the race-card feeds 
fouled in chilling fidgets

glyphed everyman's advance
to cherish one ascending

giving divinity thought-shadow charges
to dodge doc's sunny reparteé

finally

bipolar glue-power unclogs the gash
cherish your psyche's wormwood-hack
your peace-ink cooling blue
your snow-truth judgement bridged

with one bank and a gun

whose prophet
son of none



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Notes: 
    1.  A journalist once asked the Dalai Lama if he had to reduce the         teachings of Buddhism to one word, what would it be. His response was; "Compassion". 

     If asked to do the same for Christianity, my word, similarly, would be: "Kindness".

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Date: 1/10/2024 8:21:00 PM
You are a poets poet. This poem beautifully written. I can relate. I lost a son before he could see the Sun. I'm glad you are on Poetry Soup. What a blessing that you can write poetry. I love this poem...
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Robert Warlov
Date: 1/11/2024 1:42:00 AM
I'm very sorry for your loss but encouraged by your finding resonance or a kindred-spirit in this poem. A Hemingway character once said; 'The world breaks everyone but some are able to find strength in the broken places'. Thanks for your interest.
Date: 1/10/2024 8:09:00 PM
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Date: 7/10/2018 5:52:00 PM
I just did a little whirlwind tour of some of your poems. I know I'm just grazing the surface, I really have to come back when my brain's more functional. Potent stuff. xomo
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Robert Warlov
Date: 11/13/2018 9:32:00 PM
sorry about late reply. Thanks for comments.
Date: 2/21/2018 3:12:00 PM
Very emotive one! Sorry for your loss, Robert. It is so interesting the note you put at the bottom. I recently saw a segment of Oprah WInfrey's Super Soul Monday and there was some woman on there (forgot her name) talking about the way all religions do have one thing in common: the golden rule. Nothing is more important to mankind than that.
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Robert Warlov
Date: 2/23/2018 12:10:00 AM
Thanks. My son's bipolar religious epiphany told him to rob a bank. He's still in jail. I changed the last lines for greater clarity. -- The new bible could be just two words long: "Be kind".
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