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Artwork by James Valvis 

It was never about the suit, the charcoal stitching, the pocket square that folds itself, the red tie I swore was alive. At first, it just stood there— hooves crossed, ears like knives stabbing into the conference room light. It never spoke, but no one dared speak over it. The org charts bent to its gaze. Quarterly losses shrunk like timothy hay waiting too long for sun. I kept my hungry eyes on the llama, after all, its black-marble stare could polish a version of the best vision of myself, if I let it: animal energy tugging at my own red tie, my voice cracking like a glass ceiling when I pitched the last idea I was proud of. Now the llama knows my name. It signs my emails and leaves fur in my throat when I try to say no. On Tuesdays, it stands too close to the mirror in the breakroom, straightening its tie with my hands, licking the salt from neck— its muzzle smelling like a ferment of wet grass and my sweat. The interns whisper that it’s a myth, but they’ve all stopped wearing red. I now sit at the head of the table, rubbing my hindquarters with two toes on the scale, protecting my own wall-eyed stare. The suit fits better than I thought. You can see everyone from here— their necks, their ties, the slow nodding of skulls. The llama was never absurd. It’s they who look strange now.

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Date: 1/5/2025 9:24:00 AM
What a creative write/picture you have here. I enjoyed reading this. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have A Blessed Day writing away.................
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Date: 12/19/2024 3:56:00 PM
Wow. Such an intreagimg poem. Very sophisticated writing
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Date: 12/23/2024 11:40:00 PM
Andrea, you are too kind. I genuinely admire your work and consider it high praise when you comment on mine. Thank you so much. Have a lovely holiday if you choose to celebrate :)
Date: 12/16/2024 5:18:00 AM
I ditched my opening line and had another go - I'm hoping we both win - one by the editor and one by the artist ;)
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Date: 12/23/2024 11:41:00 PM
#manifesting
Date: 12/15/2024 11:15:00 PM
Of course I should take all the credit for identifying the animal in the first place but instead I read this with envy wondering just how you got this idea and executed it so well... I felt a chill reading it, somehow the risks seem real - becoming the animal in a corporate world and not even caring when realisation hits. This is stunning poetry and I'm going to give myself a good talking to re creativity. My poem began "a mammal, a man" I wrote a few more lines then exited the game lol
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Date: 12/23/2024 11:37:00 PM
All this flattery and yet we have to remember that I first thought this was painting of a donkey xD

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