The Promised Land

The promised land

The promised land
Look for me in the rainbow; I am always there.
Dancing with your music, no time to spare.
I am always a drunken and dancing with your songs.
I am living within you; you do always care.

I will be the sunlight, moonlight when it’s night.
Nightingales sing all night since you are always bright.
I am always drinking, drinking of your dew.
Drunken like a swallow dancing in your light.

I have long been waiting, hoping to know you,
 I can hear your music, loving it through and through. 
Me and all the flowers are always trying hard, 
Hoping you can teach us more than we can do.

Watching you at sunset underneath a tree,
Seeking to find wisdom, learning how to see.
My eyes are so blinded that they see only gray.
Gray is always sorrow; free me in your glee.

I am always lonely; nature is my friend.
Talking, smiling, and dancing, I always do pretend.
Your sounds to me are music, music to my soul,
tell me, hold me, teach me how all this will end.
8/6/2022 Haloo

This is a Persian-style poem called the Rubaiyat. If you want to learn more, read my book called " The Edge of the Prairie, A glance into the Persian-Style poetry" by me on the Amazon platform.
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Situation Avatar
August 24, 2023 at 10:23 AM
Imaginative
George Avatar
January 2, 2023 at 7:06 PM
Beautifully written Rubaiyat ! Your lines sing and dance within me. Thanks Pashang for your kind visit to my page and your comment.
Maverick Avatar
October 1, 2022 at 11:02 AM
A most eloquent exellent rubiyat here Pashang A joy to encounter, and unpack.' Enjoyed for A second read.'
La France Avatar
September 6, 2022 at 11:50 PM
Pashang, excellent Rubaiyat poem wonderfully penned and presented and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - Let Your Muse Be Inspired, and I love the image too, God Bless ~
Salehi Avatar
September 24, 2022 at 9:50 AM
Thank you Constance
Chiri Avatar
September 4, 2022 at 9:11 PM
Creatively beautiful!:)
Salehi Avatar
September 24, 2022 at 9:50 AM
Thank you very much Brenda
Kendrick Avatar
September 3, 2022 at 4:53 AM
Creative way to go with this winning work. Back with congratulations. Sara
Salehi Avatar
September 24, 2022 at 9:49 AM
Huh thank you, Sarah
Maverick Avatar
August 18, 2022 at 2:29 PM
A write of communication Pashang; no Doubt.. I see it's for Constances contest.. I have entered the very same one..' Do you Do many for contests.? Always good to read Of you though, Life will structure us for better If we Let it.'
Salehi Avatar
August 19, 2022 at 12:10 PM
Yes, it is... I do not usually enter any contests... The topics are usually very shallow. This one I liked a lot.Thanks, my friend... Be well...
Goldsmith Avatar
August 16, 2022 at 11:27 AM
WOW!!! What a beautiful write/painting. I love this one. A wonderful ending. Is this your quote, "The sounds of Earth are the music of my soul." If yes, did you add it to your quote page??? I wish you would write more. Have a great/blessed day...............
Salehi Avatar
August 19, 2022 at 12:07 PM
No, it is not... it's from a contest... Thanks anyway... I have to find a topic that interests me to write... I have a ton of masnavi, which are all stories.
Raven Avatar
August 14, 2022 at 10:36 AM
Hi Pashang, such a wonderful Rubaiyat from your pen. I have missed seeing poetry written in this most wonderful form. This is an exceptional write, painted on the mind's canvas with such beautiful lines. Good Luck in the contest, this reads excellent. Sorry it has taken me so long to drop by. Have a wonderful Sunday ..... Mike.
Salehi Avatar
August 19, 2022 at 12:04 PM
Thanks, my old friend... you are always too kind...
Kendrick Avatar
August 14, 2022 at 9:10 AM
I like the painting chosen. It is very well done and unique work. Your description and the emotion felt with reading the poem are outstanding. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for visiting my page . Sara
Salehi Avatar
August 19, 2022 at 12:03 PM
Thanks... the painting is my latest... rather simple but thought-provoking...
Canerdy Avatar
August 12, 2022 at 6:45 AM
Pashang, your skillfully written, vividly descriptive poem shines with love of nature. Janice
Salehi Avatar
August 19, 2022 at 12:02 PM
Indeed... I love nature... Thanks, Janice.
Dietrich Avatar
August 9, 2022 at 1:15 PM
Love the form you used and how you wrote in that form. Gorgeous.
Salehi Avatar
August 19, 2022 at 12:01 PM
You are so kind Andrea...
Rodrigues Avatar
August 8, 2022 at 5:13 PM
Very nice!
Salehi Avatar
August 19, 2022 at 12:00 PM
Thanks kim
Horsman Avatar
August 7, 2022 at 9:15 PM
When one as written of nature so well as this gem, it makes one want to guard what we have so much more.
Salehi Avatar
August 8, 2022 at 12:26 AM
My dear Harry...I have nothing but pain, the things I write are just remedies to take me out of this illusive reality... You are too kind to me... Thank you.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
August 7, 2022 at 7:00 AM
You brilliantly allow your avid reader to dive into the depth of your well and drink from your fine thoughts.. reach for your rainbow and relish in its satiating colours.. land on your promised land and feel with the heart what eyes could not see.. What a wonderful poetry, Pashang! A true treat to read! A gem of rarity! God bless you and your Muse of poetry! My deepest regards..
Salehi Avatar
August 7, 2022 at 7:08 PM
Oh, Besma... Your comment is so nice that I do not know how to respond. The only thing I can say to you is, Thank you...
Proxenos Avatar
August 7, 2022 at 6:43 AM
Your Muse was not only clever but brilliant and together you produced a poem that I am certain will awe many readers . Well penned my friend keep well and safe, hugs blessings Jennifer..
Salehi Avatar
August 7, 2022 at 7:05 PM
My friend... you and other friends are the reason for me to write...If you keep reading I'll keep writing... Always, Pashang
Pandit Avatar
August 7, 2022 at 6:23 AM
Beautiful painting, beautiful poem, Pashang. Best to you.
Salehi Avatar
August 7, 2022 at 7:01 PM
Thank you, my friend... you are so kind
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