The Promised Deliverer

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the places where our lord walked translated into a prayer 

The hearth of God speaks inwardly 
to our hearts and soul when we accept 
the house of bread is spoken of in our Holy book
 
In the place of the skull balance holding truth
from the watchtower of strength you grew Almighty 

As One Star You remain the brightest lit 
when you stood at the porch in our church 

In the place where the olives are pressed 
the word made flesh became King 

Corpus Christi Amen

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 1/21/2018 1:03:00 PM
Praise the Lord...Blessings to you Liam
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Date: 1/19/2018 1:11:00 PM
- Beautiful, Liam - Best wishes for a lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/19/2018 12:08:00 PM
Liam, thank you for this beautiful prayer to our Lord. All I can say is Amen!
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Date: 1/19/2018 11:04:00 AM
Hi Liam!:)) Wow! A very beautiful, n' oustanding, spiritual, inspirational poem you've written here ,my dearest friend Liam.I enjoyed it!!Very beautifully written!Just awesome!:))Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + + !A fav ! You have a heart of pure gold!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray a lot that you're okay in everything, Liam.Wishing you always all the very best in everything you do , Liam!:)Take always very good care of yourself in all!Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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