The Promise

The Promise

A promise wakes your mornings
 Following you in whispers,
Walking in your footsteps,
Murmuring in the soft bleating
 Of birthing ewes
As close to you as the breath
 You take in and out
Sustaining life –
 A life you yearn to extend
In a line longer
Than a string of stars
Created by your creator’s hand.
And, even in the stillness
 Of newborn moonlight,
When the promise spills out of you
 In ribbons of scarlet saturating the ground
With an earthy musk,
It stands before you,
 Beckons you to leave your sighs
In the alabaster light –
 Left as one month – one year –
Folds into the seasons
 When lambing, shearing, spinning and weaving
Become as one day passing –
 An unbroken thread
Defined by the promise
Until, one day, touched by the divine whimsy
The absurd begins to grow
Deep within that place in you
That stopped believing
Until you too must look past
The cycle of the moon with joy and expectation
Dancing together in every heartbeat
And every new breath –
The promise smiles, then laughs,
As waters burst to bless the barren
Flowing on the arid ground
Where scarlet ribbons once turned the earth 
Bright crimson;
Your barren arms, now filled with blessings,
Reach out to cradle
The promise thriving with an invitation
To look beyond this family
Into the days and hours approaching –
An unbroken heartbeat –
A whirlwind rising
Pulling up your new, now ancient family tribe,
To mirror in their eyes
Your covenant
Yearning to become one heartbeat
Pulsing throughout days, weeks and decades
Called back into the fertile birthing place
Where the One, the Word, resides forever.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 2/5/2020 1:13:00 PM
Sam, congratulations on your win with this excellent write _Constance
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/5/2020 10:45:00 PM
Thank you Constance! I am honored and blessed by your messaged.
Date: 2/4/2020 11:22:00 PM
Wow Sam, I can certainly see why this is a top winner! This is awe inspiring! Congratulations on your win! xxoo
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/4/2020 11:30:00 PM
Connie, Thank you! As always you honor me with your feedback and encouragement! I'm so glad this piece spoke to you!
Date: 2/4/2020 6:53:00 PM
Sam, a great circle-of-life poem imbued with hope in the resurrection and sprinkled with subtle references to the Savior of mankind. I love the line, "Where scarlet ribbons once turned the earth Bright crimson". God bless you ~ John
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/4/2020 10:40:00 PM
Thank you John! I am deeply honored. I wanted the poem to reflect hope in the face of disappointment.
Date: 2/3/2020 4:20:00 PM
Beautifully written, Sam. And I love the way you ended it by having us back into our birthplace (heaven). Very nicely done! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/4/2020 10:37:00 PM
Hi dear Carolyn - Thank you for visit and your good wishes! I too love the way the poem ends!
Date: 2/3/2020 2:43:00 AM
This is wonderful poetry, Sam, a farmers tale, which takes me back to my childhood in the Yorkshire dales,
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/4/2020 10:33:00 PM
Hi Harry, Thank you so much for your message and a look into your childhood. Much appreciated!
Date: 2/3/2020 12:25:00 AM
Well written Sam, for many of us who follow the word, our sacrifices will be rewarded. Congrats. Tom
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/4/2020 10:31:00 PM
Hi Tom, Like Sarah, we have a promise - a heavenly promise of life. Thank you!
Date: 2/3/2020 12:01:00 AM
Wow! Congrats. Indeed, the Lord's assurance is a marvelous promise. God bless you.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/4/2020 10:30:00 PM
Thank you for your blessings and your message.
Date: 2/2/2020 11:58:00 PM
Great free flowing style like a stream.. Have a great day Sam..
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/4/2020 10:27:00 PM
Hi Jenish! Thank you! I always appreciate your thoughful comments! Have a great day yourself!
Date: 2/2/2020 11:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/4/2020 10:24:00 PM
Thank you for your good wishes. I am grateful.
Date: 2/2/2020 8:15:00 PM
Wonderful penning Sam I am never surprised to see you on top of the winners list. Congrats on your win :) hugs
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/2/2020 11:33:00 PM
Hi Sandy, Thank you for all of your kinds words and encouragement! They mean so much.
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