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The Promise

The Promise A promise wakes your mornings Following you in whispers, Walking in your footsteps, Murmuring in the soft bleating Of birthing ewes As close to you as the breath You take in and out Sustaining life – A life you yearn to extend In a line longer Than a string of stars Created by your creator’s hand. And, even in the stillness Of newborn moonlight, When the promise spills out of you In ribbons of scarlet saturating the ground With an earthy musk, It stands before you, Beckons you to leave your sighs In the alabaster light – Left as one month – one year – Folds into the seasons When lambing, shearing, spinning and weaving Become as one day passing – An unbroken thread Defined by the promise Until, one day, touched by the divine whimsy The absurd begins to grow Deep within that place in you That stopped believing Until you too must look past The cycle of the moon with joy and expectation Dancing together in every heartbeat And every new breath – The promise smiles, then laughs, As waters burst to bless the barren Flowing on the arid ground Where scarlet ribbons once turned the earth Bright crimson; Your barren arms, now filled with blessings, Reach out to cradle The promise thriving with an invitation To look beyond this family Into the days and hours approaching – An unbroken heartbeat – A whirlwind rising Pulling up your new, now ancient family tribe, To mirror in their eyes Your covenant Yearning to become one heartbeat Pulsing throughout days, weeks and decades Called back into the fertile birthing place Where the One, the Word, resides forever.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 2/5/2020 1:13:00 PM
Sam, congratulations on your win with this excellent write _Constance
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/5/2020 10:45:00 PM
Thank you Constance! I am honored and blessed by your messaged.
Date: 2/4/2020 11:22:00 PM
Wow Sam, I can certainly see why this is a top winner! This is awe inspiring! Congratulations on your win! xxoo
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/4/2020 11:30:00 PM
Connie, Thank you! As always you honor me with your feedback and encouragement! I'm so glad this piece spoke to you!
Date: 2/4/2020 6:53:00 PM
Sam, a great circle-of-life poem imbued with hope in the resurrection and sprinkled with subtle references to the Savior of mankind. I love the line, "Where scarlet ribbons once turned the earth Bright crimson". God bless you ~ John
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/4/2020 10:40:00 PM
Thank you John! I am deeply honored. I wanted the poem to reflect hope in the face of disappointment.
Date: 2/3/2020 4:20:00 PM
Beautifully written, Sam. And I love the way you ended it by having us back into our birthplace (heaven). Very nicely done! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/4/2020 10:37:00 PM
Hi dear Carolyn - Thank you for visit and your good wishes! I too love the way the poem ends!
Date: 2/3/2020 2:43:00 AM
This is wonderful poetry, Sam, a farmers tale, which takes me back to my childhood in the Yorkshire dales,
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/4/2020 10:33:00 PM
Hi Harry, Thank you so much for your message and a look into your childhood. Much appreciated!
Date: 2/3/2020 12:25:00 AM
Well written Sam, for many of us who follow the word, our sacrifices will be rewarded. Congrats. Tom
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/4/2020 10:31:00 PM
Hi Tom, Like Sarah, we have a promise - a heavenly promise of life. Thank you!
Date: 2/3/2020 12:01:00 AM
Wow! Congrats. Indeed, the Lord's assurance is a marvelous promise. God bless you.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/4/2020 10:30:00 PM
Thank you for your blessings and your message.
Date: 2/2/2020 11:58:00 PM
Great free flowing style like a stream.. Have a great day Sam..
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/4/2020 10:27:00 PM
Hi Jenish! Thank you! I always appreciate your thoughful comments! Have a great day yourself!
Date: 2/2/2020 11:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/4/2020 10:24:00 PM
Thank you for your good wishes. I am grateful.
Date: 2/2/2020 8:15:00 PM
Wonderful penning Sam I am never surprised to see you on top of the winners list. Congrats on your win :) hugs
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/2/2020 11:33:00 PM
Hi Sandy, Thank you for all of your kinds words and encouragement! They mean so much.

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