The Promise

Without you, I am not who I am
Am I selfish for wanting you to sing again?
I see the turmoil in your soul
We've fought back the monsters before
The last time, you carried me
On your shield
Until I could walk, until I was healed.

When you're struggling in a sea of darkness
And have lost sight of the shore
When you slip beneath the waves
I'll swim you to the surface
Allow me to return your light.

Even if you falter,
Even if you break, even if you hate
Me, I will not abandon you.

Look at me, don't let your eyes fall
We'll make it if we have to crawl.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Roper Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 2:19 PM
Congratulations on your win, Michelle ,great meaningful verse .. Hugs Eve
Faulkner Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 3:43 PM
So glad for your comment, Eve, have a lovely day-
Gauthier Avatar
March 24, 2018 at 11:35 PM
Well done and congrats, Michelle.
Faulkner Avatar
March 25, 2018 at 8:29 AM
So appreciate your comment!
Gentry Avatar
March 24, 2018 at 9:03 PM
Congratulations on your win with this encouraging and heartfelt poem.
Faulkner Avatar
March 25, 2018 at 8:30 AM
Thank you for your kind comment, Susan!
Wolf Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 6:05 PM
Way to go in the contest, Michelle! A well-deserved win for you and this superb poem! Happy, happy... :) gw
Faulkner Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 3:43 PM
thank you once again!
Andresen Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 4:03 PM
- Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest, Michelle :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Faulkner Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 8:23 AM
thank you so much!
One Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 3:56 PM
Great uplifting words of support Michelle..Congratulation on your first place, we should all be there for one another, so we can all be strong..
Faulkner Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 8:24 AM
I'm so touched, thank you Silent One!
Krutsinger Avatar
March 18, 2018 at 8:47 AM
Optimistic and amazing.
Faulkner Avatar
March 18, 2018 at 9:42 AM
So grateful for your kind words!
Wolf Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 10:32 PM
A woman's selfless love and devotion---unmatched and unmatchable! Gives this member of the masculine clan pause!! Thanks! :) gw
Faulkner Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 8:19 AM
Much appreciate your thoughts as always!
Faulkner Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 11:11 AM
Thank you so much for your encouraging words, Arturo.
Michael Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 10:58 AM
Truly a struggle of endurance... An encouraging poem indeed...All the best Michelle
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