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The Promise

Without you, I am not who I am Am I selfish for wanting you to sing again? I see the turmoil in your soul We've fought back the monsters before The last time, you carried me On your shield Until I could walk, until I was healed. When you're struggling in a sea of darkness And have lost sight of the shore When you slip beneath the waves I'll swim you to the surface Allow me to return your light. Even if you falter, Even if you break, even if you hate Me, I will not abandon you. Look at me, don't let your eyes fall We'll make it if we have to crawl.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/26/2018 2:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Michelle ,great meaningful verse .. Hugs Eve
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/26/2018 3:43:00 PM
So glad for your comment, Eve, have a lovely day-
Date: 3/24/2018 11:35:00 PM
Well done and congrats, Michelle.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/25/2018 8:29:00 AM
So appreciate your comment!
Date: 3/24/2018 9:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this encouraging and heartfelt poem.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/25/2018 8:30:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comment, Susan!
Date: 3/23/2018 6:05:00 PM
Way to go in the contest, Michelle! A well-deserved win for you and this superb poem! Happy, happy... :) gw
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/26/2018 3:43:00 PM
thank you once again!
Date: 3/22/2018 4:03:00 PM
- Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest, Michelle :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/23/2018 8:23:00 AM
thank you so much!
Date: 3/22/2018 3:56:00 PM
Great uplifting words of support Michelle..Congratulation on your first place, we should all be there for one another, so we can all be strong..
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/23/2018 8:24:00 AM
I'm so touched, thank you Silent One!
Date: 3/18/2018 8:47:00 AM
Optimistic and amazing.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/18/2018 9:42:00 AM
So grateful for your kind words!
Date: 3/12/2018 10:32:00 PM
A woman's selfless love and devotion---unmatched and unmatchable! Gives this member of the masculine clan pause!! Thanks! :) gw
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/13/2018 8:19:00 AM
Much appreciate your thoughts as always!
Date: 3/12/2018 11:11:00 AM
Thank you so much for your encouraging words, Arturo.
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Date: 3/12/2018 10:58:00 AM
Truly a struggle of endurance... An encouraging poem indeed...All the best Michelle
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