The Prodigy

Her thoughts were like a great machine
Driven by a force of unlimited potential
Reactive responses tempered to produce such diversity
Each image a symbol that armed her mind to Manipulation

The winds of puberty recently passed
Bringing with it a cruel mimicry and argued caution for
Sensations of the body that allured and called for attention

She walked a delicate edge at such a young age
Her words now always outlined in Overreaching Brilliance
Rich consciousness displaying Minutiae of Observation
That expressed great energy of sophistication and a Circle Sense
That All Life is Interconnected and in Service of All Other Life

So many ideas began to spring from nothing – 
On one side the cold hand of mortality
On the other the nurturing rustle of warm colors

Snared by Destiny and shocked into Deep Understanding
She saw the world as not nice
Yet split with a duality that offered such beauty – 
Wisdom and valor and justice and prayer 
Hold back the darkness in a grip of steel

“What senses do we lack that we are so oblivious
         Of another world singing all around us?”

Tears pressed tautly for escape beneath her closed lids
As Supreme Notions and Designs came unbidden
From a place beyond places…

 – That which submits Ultimately Rules – 
 – A gift is a blessing For the Giver – 
 – Leadership is not revealed Without Conflict –
 – The Wisest know what They Do Not Know –
 – Prevailing over others is strength – Prevailing Over the Self is Greatness… 
 – Erasing desire Brings Peace – 
 – Life is not a mystery to solve – but rather a Reality to be Experienced….

Profound impressions kept coming on and on and she wept for futility – 
For who could she tell…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Oloye Avatar
January 30, 2016 at 7:39 PM
B9E
Johnston Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 3:38 PM
Written with such a flourish Terry, like a cloudburst in spring, feels almost like stream of consciousness stuff. The end was a little preachy but mindful and empathetic. One humorous suggestion (in my mind) "and she wept prodigiously..." the futility is there for all to see...
Clay Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 7:54 PM
Poetry like this makes my heart happy. This is outstanding.
Polcari Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 12:10 PM
Mindy - I am pleased you found merit and worth to this verse. Thank you so very much for your time and sentiments - it means a lot - and I sincerely appreciate it. Terry
Polcari Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 3:24 PM
Thank you Nicola -- I am most pleased you found merit here. That means a lot. I will try to catch up with you as soon as I can figure out how to navigate this site - its getting a little frustrating. Again my thanks. Terry
A  Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 3:10 PM
Well expressed Terrence... Thank you for sharing, SKAT
Polcari Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 3:29 PM
Sorry Skat -- I replied but it went somewhere else - man, I am getting a little frustrated trying to figure out the site. I probably should come back tomorrow. But Thank you. Thank so much
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