The Probe

We've LANDed a PROBE on a COMet
and FOUND it was MADE of green VOMit.
      Well, CREAtures withIN it,
      deCIded to THIN it,
serve PROBE a pea SOUP, then emBALM it.


posted: 15 Nov, 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 9/6/2015 3:23:00 PM
Very clever indeed! Really enjoyed reading this entertaining limerick! Onto the next! Always, Laura
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Date: 5/29/2015 1:14:00 PM
So clever... brilliantly constructed with your trademark idiomatic language. BRAVO Terry! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 12/17/2014 3:54:00 PM
haha, you are so good. I see this won something?? What contest was it in?
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Terry O'Leary
Date: 1/12/2015 10:40:00 AM
Oh thank you Andrea!! The contest was "Limericks Clean and Clever"
Date: 11/30/2014 2:01:00 AM
AWESOME WIN ~SKAT~
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Terry O'Leary
Date: 12/7/2014 1:40:00 PM
Thank you Skat!
Date: 11/24/2014 8:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your win.
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Terry O'Leary
Date: 12/7/2014 1:39:00 PM
Thank you Maurice!
Date: 11/24/2014 10:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Terry
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Terry O'Leary
Date: 12/7/2014 1:39:00 PM
Thank you Brenda!
Date: 11/24/2014 8:47:00 AM
Hey hey Terry a real lim...liked it so much congrats on win..rajat
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Terry O'Leary
Date: 12/7/2014 2:07:00 PM
Thank you, Rajat!
Date: 11/23/2014 8:18:00 PM
Great limerick, Terry! Congrats on your winning work...hugs, Rhonda
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Terry O'Leary
Date: 12/7/2014 2:12:00 PM
Thank you, Rhonda!!
Date: 11/23/2014 5:02:00 PM
Dear Terry, loved this one the first time I read it and am so glad to see it in the winners' circle. (After the holidays perhaps you and I could try co-writing another limerick. I had so much fun with our first one.) Congratulations my witty friend! Love, carolyn
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Date: 11/23/2014 4:44:00 PM
Congratulations Terry on your witty limerick and win..
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Date: 11/23/2014 3:58:00 PM
Hi Terry, congratulations on your win! Your Limerick is very witty and sure made me laugh! Sandra
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Date: 11/23/2014 3:40:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats terry - well done!!! hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/22/2014 7:37:00 AM
I have my fingers crossed for you, the meter seems Ok - but what do I know LOL, Light & Love
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Date: 11/21/2014 10:50:00 AM
This is both witty and original, Terry! Inserting capital letters is a good idea and a help when it comes down to reading! gl in the contest. // paul
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Date: 11/19/2014 5:19:00 PM
The problem with a probe when it leave's the globe. Is it's on it's own beyond the ozone. Awesome limerick Terry. Peace. :)
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Date: 11/18/2014 2:15:00 PM
Oh, so witty, Terry! Your imagination and talent for limericks is extraordinary. Really had me laughing with that awesome last line. Best wishes in the limerick contest, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/16/2014 8:01:00 AM
Lol...wonderful Terry....cheers
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Terry O'Leary
Date: 11/17/2014 2:18:00 AM
Thank you, Tim... glad I could make you laugh!!
Date: 11/15/2014 12:03:00 PM
LOL love the humour here:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 11/15/2014 12:34:00 PM
I hope you get placed high:-) hugs jan xx
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Terry O'Leary
Date: 11/15/2014 12:15:00 PM
Thanks, Jan... I wrote it at your suggestion... ;-))
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