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The Private Eye and the Femme Fatale

Pulp fiction had nothing on him. He was a man’s man. A protagonist of his own making, self-reliant, and self-assured. Marlow kept his wisecracks to the bare minimum when meeting a new client. Dames were not as compliant as they used to be, and they carried their own derringers now. More dangerous than ten years ago. He leaned back in his chair, enjoying a swallow of nicotine from his favorite cigarette. He had heard this woman was stacked. Mrs. What? He reached for his paper. Mrs. Stanton. She sounded stacked, a real femme fatale. A harsh knock came on his outside door. not a woman’s knock, and yet, there she was. “she’s a murderess This mattered not to him now Private eye smitten” Written 4-29-2019 Contest: Pick a title, volume 4 – Haibun Prompt #2: The private eye and the femme fatale Sponsor: Edward Ibeh

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Date: 5/24/2019 5:19:00 PM
Striking film noir imagery! This is so well-done, Caren:-) Congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/24/2019 8:01:00 PM
Thank you Edward. I truly am honored.
Date: 4/30/2019 10:42:00 AM
I see it all in black and white and hear the narrator's voice... poem noir :)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/30/2019 3:56:00 PM
I am so glad you remember these old radio shows!

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