The Prisoner

Come, my darling,
Make me a prisoner of your blistering love

So

In the dungeon of your arms, my freedom
To find!


© Demetrios Trifiatis
  23 SEPTEMBER 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Manassian Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 4:56 AM
I read this earlier, my dear poet, but I was unable to post a comment. I absolutely adore this one.....so beautiful and sweet.....in every way. To be a captive to love is deliciously sweet! Hugs
Trifiatis Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 5:05 AM
Beautiful to see your smile again, dear Eileen! During your absence the sky was overcast over Poetrysoup!
Chircop Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 3:52 PM
I love the way that even through a dungeon you are able to express freedom.I love the way you managed to find love through blisters,pain and her chains.Different and beautiful!!!
Trifiatis Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 3:08 AM
Dear Charmaine it is an oximoron but love is an oximoron and the antithesis created makes the main idea stronger! Thank you for your excellent analysis and comment.
Mcdaid Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 1:50 PM
truly beautifully painted excellent piece
Trifiatis Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 2:14 PM
Thank / you my good friend, Liam! You so kind!
Onclaud Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 11:44 AM
geez, such passion in your splendid write... enjoyed thus, D... huggs
Trifiatis Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 1:31 PM
Happy you have enjoyed it, dear nette! Thank you for your passionate comment!
A. Sharma Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 10:38 AM
Wow that's romantic Demetrios n I really loved it!
Trifiatis Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 1:33 PM
If you find it romantic, dear Dr. Upma, then a romantic heart you possess! Thank you for you visit and romantic comment!
Yvonne Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 8:54 AM
Excellent write. Thank you.
Trifiatis Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 10:11 AM
Thank you my friend, Maurice!
Mehta Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 8:15 AM
Very captivating write, Demetrios. You always amaze with the epigrams
Trifiatis Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 10:12 AM
Dr. Ram, I so much appreciate your superlative comment! Thank you so much!
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