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The Prisoner

Mansion of body Adorable abode of soul Converts into prison By the cruel hands Of passing time

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/3/2012 2:01:00 AM
I REALLY LIKE this one and can relate to it.
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Date: 10/28/2012 12:31:00 PM
A thoughtful poem, Mohammad - well written. - enjoyed it. - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/27/2012 9:14:00 PM
Mohammad, .. enjoyed your poem* Goodnight! Always~ PD
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Date: 10/27/2012 10:42:00 AM
very interesting one, Mohammad. I enjoyed the read.
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Mohammad Yamin
Date: 10/28/2012 5:09:00 PM
I thank you for your kind and uplifting comment Andrea. I find it difficult to convey a meaningful thought in 31 syllables of 5 lines. However, I have attempted to do just that.

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